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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea if you're still updating this, but I hope you are. It's really good, I always enjoy a well writen Saiyan instincts-type fic. :D
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August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as long as this doesn't turn into incest I am cool X3
So far it's kinda interesting so please continue.
So far it's kinda interesting so please continue.
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*growls* cliff hanger go 2 hell. update soon.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am really liking this story a lot! As you yourself said, all of the mating stuff has "been done before," but I like how your story is fun and light. It makes me happy to read :) Some of them are way too serious. I loved the line about Goten smelling like breakfast, lunch, dinner etc. all rolled into one. I can see how that would be enticing from a Saiyan's point of view!! Also smelling like Saiyan-sex incarnate--another good line. And the one about how Chichi would be mad if Gohan just stood by and let Trunks eat Goten made me laugh out loud. A very cute and funny story so far. And with lots of very hot Trunks/Goten potential! (not to mention Goku/Vegeta). I look forward to more!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this ^_^ I can't wait to read more, are you continuing? Please do, and would you be able to let me know if you decide to continue? my email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well...hearing about what Goten's father and brother might have done was a little icky... One would think that if they're already mated they wouldn't react, BUT I like the story except for that! Trunksie is Goten's boyfriend and, as such, won't let the others near him. Please write more soon! I want to know what happens with our dear Demi saiyans. There is such a sad shortage of fics for this pairing and I shall try to get my fix where I can!! ^_~ So update. Please.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty interesting and somewhat humorous. Please update.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, awkward father son moments!
J-chan
J-chan
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the potential i see and the pairing is kinda cute. oh, and vegeta being uke? yeah, i liked that.
i would offer to beta for you, but i'm not sure how much free time i can devote. connect if you're interested and maybe we can talk? i have followed drabon ball and dbz for a long time, even into GT though i didn't enjoy it as much. if you're interested or strapped, connect. i'm always available. ~_^
i would offer to beta for you, but i'm not sure how much free time i can devote. connect if you're interested and maybe we can talk? i have followed drabon ball and dbz for a long time, even into GT though i didn't enjoy it as much. if you're interested or strapped, connect. i'm always available. ~_^
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Plese continue!!!!