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I really hope you weren't offended by my comment because I didn't intend for it to me insulting/offensive in any way at all!

I can actually understand Trowa's decision better now. I suppose he was just a little desperate and unsure of how to help so he did the first thing that came to mind...?

Btw, I thought that scene with Quatre at the firing range where he shot only at the target's groin was very powerful. & the mere fact that he shot Trowa and locked all his friends out is very telling about how deeply affected he is by the rape. It's quite heartbreaking considering how 'innocent' and altruistic his character normally is. I'd really like to see how Trowa attempts to fix things without getting shot in the head.

I understand the boys wanting to help Quatre heal but Trowa's plan was disgusting. They should have worked with him to get over his denial, to accept what happened and to finally learn to trust again. Imagine being constantly triggered into flashbacks because your friends are callous enough to think it would heal you. If anything, what they're doing would probably make it much more difficult for him & push them even farther away in the process. It's one thing to have them know what happened to him --and he's obviously ashamed of the fact -- and another to 'rub it in his face' even if it is unintentional. :\

oh oh & I'm thinking that the third person might be the art teacher? He seems pervy enough T_T

So just out of curiosity, is the third person the art teacher?

I have a feeling it's going to take more than a few kind words to get Quatre back to normal again, if that's even possible at this point. I love how his mood switches so suddenly. Update soon!

The plot thickens....I wonder if this third missing person will make a guest showing? Please update soon!

I love this story so far. You always have me waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter... which has never been too long of a wait. ^_^ Keep up the great writing

Oh no you have to fixs it, please!

Ahhh, what's wrong with him? I'm going crazy! But seriously, this is great. Quatre is so...not the stereotype that most people make him into. I love it. One suggestion though, I think your story would flow better if the chapters were longer. Like, if you combined a few into one...maybe I'm just saying that because I want to know more of the story though, lol.

Anyway, really enjoying this. Keep up the good work! We need more 3x4 stories out there...

Oh no you can't stop there, it was so good, more please!