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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(For some reason, AFF.net did not post my whole review since I used paragraphs. I'll try again.) This is a beautifully written piece. I love how you brought Feldt and Setsuna together, despite them not having much of an interaction in the series. I like how you drew out their loneliness, longing and need as they come together, gradually finding common ground, and common passions. 5 stars and one! (Now I hope AFF publishes this correctly.)