rate_review Reviews

Nice to see Vegeta turn SS3 in a story, there aren't many where he does (I would have loved to see all that blond hair cascading down his back in the anime). Also great he is the dominant one for a change, but does Goku really know what he's getting into?

Just to warn you, the last chapter is double posted. You might want to reload it.

No sooner had I reviewed when you went and added 5 more chapters. I thought I was seeing things, but thanks for the lightening update!

Nice interlude with Trunks and Goten, but when they caught their fathers I though Trunks would be more understanding. I guess he gets his temper from Vegeta.

I'm a little shocked at the ending of chapter 8. I thought it was impossible to break a Saiyan bond. Please, please get them back together *pleads with Goku's puppy dog eyes*.

Ahem, yes, you did warn us about the spelling, but as you were so young when you wrote it I guess I can forgive you. You could run it through a spellchecker now though. Short but okay. Did you ever do a sequel?