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Good job Pan has some fighting ability otherwise Gohan might have never known they were about to be raped.

Looks like Vegeta's love for showing off is going to bite him in the ass. Now Vegeta is unconscious does it mean King Vegeta has won the fight? Hope Trunks, Goten, and Gohan can come to the rescue.

That King Vegeta is pretty despicable isn't he, almost raping Bulma and treating the pleasure slaves like that. Can't wait for Vegeta to take him down a peg or two. Glad you didn't include the scenes of King Vegeta and the slaves, I'd probably have skipped over it anyway.

Nice touch with the gravity dispensers. The extra gravity is often missed in stories where humans go to planet Vegeta.

So King Vegeta was the one summoning the dragon, didn't see that one coming. I thought he died on Frieza's ship whilst attempting a rescue, guess he got away. If he wished back all that died in the explosion does that mean that Nappa and Raditz aren't back? Shame as I wanted Raditz back too *pleads at author*.

Liked the theme of the outfits you put them in. I presume that will make them instantly recognizable to the Saiyans, certainly the royal house will be. Hope King Vegeta can look past Goku's class and promote him and Gohan (not to mention all the other demis) to elite due to their power levels.

Who are the three harpie ladies? Bulma, Chichi, who else?

I smell trouble with Bra and Pan on the way. Will they catch them in the act, and if so which pair?

Bulma's a real peeping tom isn't she, no wonder she didn't mind Goten and Trunks. I wonder if she videotaped them too? Maybe not as Trunks is her son and she might feel a bit weird watching them going at it.

Oh no, Goku ate most of the chocolate pudding! That made me laugh but is there enough left for what Vegeta wants to do with it? I do hope so :-)

I just knew they'd never get through showering without pleasuring each other :-) Not unless one of them waited outside the door. It even made Goku forget his hunger for a moment!

Great way to end the chapter, I love those playful cute moments between them.

So glad Goku came back but it was touch and go for a while there. I thought Vegeta was going back to his old ways! I guess the bond is too strong. Good.

Loved the cute scene of Vegeta carrying Goku and him snuggling in his arms.

Phew *sighs in relief* you did a sequel. I hated the thought of leaving them like that and the title of one this gives me hope.

Bulma's very accommodating to Goten and Trunks isn't she? Even though Vegeta warned her I still think she's taking it very well. Good for her. Doubt Chichi will however :-(

Poor Vegeta is almost suicidal, hope Goku reconsiders before he does something stupid.