rate_review Reviews

This is an awesome story. I love Ed and Roy. Are you going to finish it? I want to know what happens now that Roy knows that Envy is Ed's half older brother.

Oops! Roy's busted! :D Nice to see this story updated! I had to go back and reread the last 3 or 4 chapters tho to kinda catch up a bit on what was going on. I'd forgotten what a kinky lusty little thing Ed is! :) That one scene puts a whole new meaning on the term 'Pudding Pop'! LOL But, oh my, I'd also forgotten all the horrors Envy did to Ed. :( You're making me remember the sad end of the anime now with this revelation of Envy being Ed's half brother. That image of Envy running Ed thru is permanently etched (scarred?) into my brain! ;_; I'm just hoping that we don't have a repeat of that in this story. I promise you that I will more than likely cry like a baby if it happens! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

That was like whoa! I've never seen Ed so wanton! I almost quit reading this when Envy showed up. I can't stand Envy! grr! I was SO happy when Roy finally rescued Ed, even if he had to indebt himself to Lust to do it. A small part of me wondered briefly if they should have some kind of code word to use to make sure the other person isn't Envy. If nothing else, they do need a safe word if they're going to keep on doing all these intensely kinky things! :D Oh! I had to laugh when Roy said, "I'm too old and too tired to keep up with you right now." *giggle* Roy called himself old!! XDD pudding! *snerk* That line from that old Pink Floyd song kept popping in my head! "How can you have any pudding if you don't eat your meat?" ROFLMAO!!

Oh my god....I will never think of pudding the same way again. Thanks a lot. Haha just kidding but seriously...I won't. >.>

Woah! This story is intense! Its not over is it? Please say there is more kinky sex! I never saw that twist coming that was awesome! Excellent job!

I really like this story. The writing is very engrossing. I had a hard time with Ed being raped by Envy, but that's not because it was poorly done. More like it was so well done I was freaked. Good job and just what I needed. =) That was some enthralling Roy x Ed.

damn that was good! I wanted Hawkeye to hit Roy when he first told her whet he had done but then I kinda forgave him when he told Ed he loved him, that was sweet. And I was right there with Ed at the end of chapter 7 - no, I wasn't crying but I could sorta feel his pain.
This was well written and wonderfully character-centric.

Wow, nice start! I look forward to seeing more XD (sex!Ed slave goodness was hot!!)