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for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

by sefiru

person Zofo
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved how Bergiin gave Vegeta-jii a reality check. He really is on his own now but still doesn't want to accept it. Will he come crawling to Kakarot in the end? Somehow I doubt it, he's just too stubborn.

Chuckled at Raditz's chibi alarm and his unique office.

So it's the last chapter next. Noooooo! I will miss this series so much. Looking forward to reading it.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chibi warning system, i like it XD
person Lily
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pick it up, pick it up!
Thank you for the update!

Ja ne
person Robyn
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEE* Can you write a story just about Radditz and the chibis? *puppy eyes* Purrty please?

Okay - As you can see, I enjoyed the interaction with Radditz, the captain and the chibi trouble detectors. :D

Vegeta's assessment of the Captain's approach to Kakarott was fun to read!

And to answer your author's note question - yes.
person Katonie
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Pick it up!!!!
That chapter was kinda funny. Elder Vegeta got his lil' plan handed back to him in shambles. ^.^ Happy day!...though i do feel a certain disappointment that there was no...action...*cough*
BUT, even if it wasn't the MOST exciting chapter ever, I bought you a Hershey's Bar! *hand the goods over*
Till next time!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Raholea
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......
*pouts*
no sex, no fights... well, another loyal subject on his knees before his king, but still. well, overall, i liked it. and yes, i enjoyed it.

but you still need to have at least one more yumy citrus scene before you close this thing off. i mean, you do them so well!!! Please?? *pulls out puppy eye look and whines*
person sm
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PICK IT UP!! Hurry, pick it up. Pick it up, pick it up, pick it up. God I love this series.
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved Vegitto, I wonder will they reach level 4? I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Vegeta-jiji is going to try to make.
person Katonie
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*crying*Ohhh! It's so beautiful*sniffle*It makes me fel all warm inside*sob, breath hitch*...*hic*Keep the updates and beautiful moments coming*sob*

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Zofo
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Koshubu got a work out! Must be tough being a dragon with no one to fight.

Whoa, fusion doesn't half make them horny, wonder how they kept their clothes on in the TV show. Loved the reactions of the other Saiyans, complete awe from both the fusion and the sex show. Truly solidified their respect for Kakarot, and Vegeta too.

Loved that bit at the end about Gogeta, really made me chuckle.

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