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for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

by sefiru

person kitkit
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god i missed this story, i can't stand when my computer breaks down on me, but anyway enoough of my problems.....i just love this story
person Robyn
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o Only sayians could get away with sex in front of a crowd. :P


Lovely as usual!
person saya
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please hurry up and write I really want Vegeta to get that lemon soon.
I thought that part with Radditz's youngest kid was hilarous!
person Zofo
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute happy chapter. Nice to see the Oozaru's kicking back and having fun. Glad Raditz made up with Gohan, and loved the chibi play.

Why has the dragon got a perm, did the kids do it or is he trying to make a fashion statement?

Makes sense for them to grow their own senzu beans. Never could figure out why no-one else did in the series. Me, I'd grow a whole allotment full of them!

Liked the end-note. Sniggers, Raditz as level 3, hehe, he'd have to put his hair in bunches to avoid falling over it :)
person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have NO idea how much i love the chibis, they just seem too cute with Raditz XD and i love the mental image of Gohan humphing off with a knot in his tail whilst in Oozaru, it's so funny!
person Robyn
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who said I didn't disturb myself with that story? *looks around and shrugs*

Any way - SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Raditz makes a good mama & you can tell him I said so. :P

Gohan makes a good papa - and you can tell him I said that as well. *glares at the Karin*
person Raholea
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*scrapes off floor chuckling*
never, EVER piss off a parent and chase their cubs.... (i'm a mom, i should know)....
and the knotted tail thing was cute. a dragon with a perm was even cuter, and a young cub trying to chew on kakkarott's tails was cute sweet, and just plum amusing. a very nice light chapter, much needed.

and i must say, no, i don't think i know ladyshadowdragon... why?
person Moiira
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll say it again and again I love your stories. You've got one of the most enjoyable sens of humor. I love the author comments. they're hilarius. ^^ have fun ^-^
person Macha
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o I read it - I think I am a bit disturbed by it, but I read it.


:P Doesn't mean it wasn't well written, just that I am having issues wrapping my tiny little brain around it. :p

person Bikki
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=^.^= oh yes!

saiyan/oozaru porn. You always surprise me! Your enginuity for creating new and barely used sex scenes astounds me. I cannot get enough. My god for a second I thought Vegeta was really going to try and shove all of Oozaru-Kakarott in! Too bad he can't and it's impossible, otherwise i think he'd be too streached out for several years. He'd prolly be fit again right when the next full moon hit vegetasei. lol.

Absolutely lovely and brilliant. I await the next installment with tingling toes.

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