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for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

by sefiru

person Katonie
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooozarus Do have more fun! Hee hee. That lemon was totally cute with Veggie climbing all over kakarot.*sigh*adorable.
For all that adorable-ness i made you some sugar cookies!
Update again soon!

Hugs & kisses

Katonie
person Zofo
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just great :-)

I really wanted to be Vegeta in this chapter, rolling around in Kakarot's fur, exploring him, and even being used as a hand-job! Never read anything like that before. Brilliant.

Looking forward to them displaying themselves to the other Saiyans, oh and what does the dragon want?
person Raholea
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dances* oozaru DO have more fun!! and i loved the Macro moment, you kept it well in line. kinda worried initially but you did well. thanks for another beautiful chapter.
can't wait till the next one. *glomps and offers cookies*
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess Oozaru really do have more fun. :D Will everyone get to see Kakarot and Vegeta while Oozaru?
person kit-kit
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loce it
person Zofo
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You made me laugh with Raditz's suspicions about Nappa and Zarbon, though it did leave an unpleasant image in my head. Those old cronies don't have a clue about Kakarot or understand Vegeta's relationship with him at all do they.

Wonder if Vegeta distracted Kakarot enough and if so how he did it :-)

Ohh is there Oozaru sex next chapter? *drools*
person Robyn
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D I liked this chapter very much. You have certainly given Radditz his own, unique personality - it was fun to read/see it in his thoughts. :) 'Kakarottosei' *snickers*

LOL....*shakes head at Ex-king Vegeta* You probably shouldn't mention whips and chains around your son if you want to keep his attention. That...was just silly of you.


:D I'd really liked to have seen Vegeta doing his darnedest to distract Kakarott.
person Bikki
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I cannot wait!

Stupid Old-Vegeta and his power hungered ways. Doesn't he understand how wonderful bondage is?
person Moiira
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what is up with the old couts! idiots do they really think that all their questions on Kakarots mental health will actually DO anything? Can't wait for the lemon ^^
person Raholea
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Personally, not a foot person... but since vegeta's position is well known and i understand the ins and outs of such things.. well, let's see how distracted we can get the new king, eh? *chuckles* and i can just imagine the look on the old man's face... utter shock... *grins evilly*

Long May Kakarrot Reign!!!
*cheers*

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