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for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

by sefiru

person Katonie
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The very end of the last chapter is what I found adorable...
This chapter was funny, what with all the old people not understanding anything. They should just butt out and live the rest of their lives in silence, I mean honestly! Don't they have better thing to do?
*sigh* Hopeless, but oh well! Please update again soon! Here's some cookies for insentive.

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Katonie
person Robyn
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D I agree with Kakarott! Mmmmmm - mud-wrestling! :D Lovely imagery! *is going off to drool in quiet now*
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Missed you last week, bummer about the modem. Now I wonder what those old cronies are up to. Kakarott and Vegeta mud (pudding) wrestle, hmmmm, could be fun. Still love your stories.
person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*droooooool* ^_____^
person Zofo
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Pants and fans self*

That was so erotic with all the rain, lightening, and after mud-wrestling those crocs. Yummy!

I always wondered why in the anime Vegeta always wanted to fight alone and now you've told me. It's cos watching Kakarot gets him too hot to think straight :-)
person Raholea
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh.... for that you're forgiven for being late...
mud wrestling crocs and smex in the rain...
you keep me coming for more!! yay!!
person Moiira
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! new chappy! BAD weather! >_< hot as ever! Keep it up! ^^
person Bikki
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh-- extremely satisfying in every possible aspect. The fight, the sex-- especially the sex. To die for.
I'm glad you liked my picture =^.^=
After this chapter, i just may have to do another because this scene will be engraved into my memory.

“So you want me to mud-wrestle a sabercroc?”
Yes do it! XD
person Katonie
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that's so sweet. they are so adorable together!
update again soon!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Bikki
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo a rainy lemon. But, i wouldn't expect anything less than delicious from you.

Oh Pure Evil, i've left you for so long! It's so good to be reading such gems again.

I would attempt to articulate an apropriately excessive flattery, but i can barely control my hands enough right now to even try. I just re-read everything. Twice. Mmmm.....so good.

Keep being brilliant. <3

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