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for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

by sefiru

schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the fact Raditz's chibis still cling to his tail, it's so cute! and mean old ex-king Vegeta
person Robyn
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It's too short! :( *wibbles* Fun to read though. :) I really do like this universe a lot. Glad to see Radditz and Vegeta haven't lost their edge within their new comfy surroundings. Kakarott is lucky to have them at his side. :D
person Raholea
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
wet t-shirt contests... yummy....
and yeah! lemon next chapter!!! i will finally be home for the next installment of stuff... *glomps author*

i.. can't.. wait....
person Zofo
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just what are all those old geezers up to, insinuating Kakarot has mental problems. At least the vast majority of Saiyans think he's a great king. Can't wait for their comeuppance!

*drools at the thought of Kakarot in a wet t-shirt contest*
person Katonie
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will eat my plot first Mother, but I don't haave to like it!
This chapter was really good and entertaining( also had plot ). Even though it had no real ACTION, it was still good and I think I can take the wait till the next chapter.
Till next time.

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person kitkit
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooow me love, vegeta has a one track mind
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
would it be too much for me to request Old Vegeta being sent to a distant galaxy? would make me feel better anyways lol. can't believe this will be the last one :'( will look out for your fic though :D
person Raholea
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a good start and a lot of potential. lots of smut, i hope???
i'll be here reviewing every weekend!!!!! (you know hat i mean...)
person kitkit
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far, i wonder if kakarott and vegeta mom will be revived.
person Zofo
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great, a new PE story! Shame it's the last as I really love this series.

Knew King Vegeta wouldn't take it lying down. He going to cause trouble mark my words. Damn Kakarot's good nature for not getting rid of him. Nice choice of job by the way :-)

I see that Kakarot gets his love of nature from his father. Those Saiyans have been living with too much technology, they need to get back to their roots, and maybe run around as Oozaru for a while as well.

Hope we get a bit of Kakarot/Vegeta in the next chapter, perhaps they were too busy making out to feature in this one :-)

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