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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it. update soon
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters you've added here. I like the tension between Trunks and Pan. Keep up the good work!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH god I love Pan and Trunks together. I just about died when I got to the end of chapter 5 to see it was the last and I'll have to wait for chappy 6
Please, please, please don't make me wait long for chappy 6 to see how Trunks acts when he sees Pan with the other guy
Please, please, please don't make me wait long for chappy 6 to see how Trunks acts when he sees Pan with the other guy
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW...your story writing for pan and trunks is so awesome I can't wait for chapter 6 and the many other chapters to come. I just hope they get put up really soon. ^_^
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice concept. I really liked the forming of the emotional bond, and how sweet Trunks suddenly was. It is clear Pan has a good effect on him. Please keep up the good work.
Vegeta's explanation and intervention was also a nice touch.
Vegeta's explanation and intervention was also a nice touch.