rate_review Reviews

Aww, I don't know why you don't write longer stories, they're all well written and really cute ^.^. I especially like the way you depict your characters, they're happy and fun, making your fics (especially this one) as nice escape, in a sense.
Although I really do with they were longer, this one especially. Accidental kisses always open up a can of worms. You could write a really sweet love story, but instead you chose to tease us! *mock glare*
Keep at it! :D

I liked this piece as well...I just wish it was longer, really exploring what Trunks would feel or say after watching his future counterpart kiss his best friend. Talk about awkward. It was really well written and cute. I loved reading Trunks's resentment about Mirai and how perfect the other seems compared to him. Still, I like present Trunks because he does have that edge to him of irresponsibility and spontaneity (at least until he joined the working world during GT). It's funny how he does become much like Mirai in the end. Well, if you go along with GT, that is. Thanks for writing it!

Awww man, this was sooo cool ♥♥ sooo cute! I loved it so much that now I'm gonna go through your stuff to see if you have more Truten *-*

*sits staring at the computer, waiting for an update* you...ended it too short...*glares at others who have said the same about my stories.* Who spoke up? don't make me hurt someone! Anyway, for the love of Kami...ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!