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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sarcasm appreciated; readers suitably chastised; mission accomplished. ^^
Loved the story, I wonder whether Veggie plans to do that again?
Loved the story, I wonder whether Veggie plans to do that again?
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^.- what is Vegeta's evil plan?
J-chan
J-chan
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That made me laugh out loud at one point. Nice lemon, shame it's a one-shot as I'd like to read the aftermath.
I didn't even know we could rate stories until you said, I'm such a thicko! Anyway I've rated it now.
Hope you re-consider and post longer stories here. I love long epics and am not bothered whether they have lemons or not, a good plot is what makes a good story.
I didn't even know we could rate stories until you said, I'm such a thicko! Anyway I've rated it now.
Hope you re-consider and post longer stories here. I love long epics and am not bothered whether they have lemons or not, a good plot is what makes a good story.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh.
*blush*
yeah, is it that obvious that i'm an uncultured american pig?
hahaha...i love learning about the differences in languages. when i was an exchange student in france, i took an english class that was taught by a guy that leaned english in england (surprise, surprise). we were describing this picture of a poor man running after a carriage with king george in it, begging for money, and my teacher said that the poor man was probably a skank.
naturally, i burst out laughing and he asked me what was so funny. he said in british english, a skank was a poor person who moved from place to place, a nomad, i guess. i told him in american english a skank was a dated term for a ho, and he blushed and told me he hoped none of the french students were following our conversation...
i dunno if he was acurate in his usage of the word, because he was known to mess up on prepositions alot, but anywho, thanks for the tid bit.
:D
can i ask a stupid question?
when you watch dbz, do u watch the same dub as us americans? i'm assuming so, but i just love hearing the different dubs and i'm trying to imagine goku talking with a different accent but in english. nothing beats the original japanese, but...yeah, anyway this is getting way too long... |_|
*blush*
yeah, is it that obvious that i'm an uncultured american pig?
hahaha...i love learning about the differences in languages. when i was an exchange student in france, i took an english class that was taught by a guy that leaned english in england (surprise, surprise). we were describing this picture of a poor man running after a carriage with king george in it, begging for money, and my teacher said that the poor man was probably a skank.
naturally, i burst out laughing and he asked me what was so funny. he said in british english, a skank was a poor person who moved from place to place, a nomad, i guess. i told him in american english a skank was a dated term for a ho, and he blushed and told me he hoped none of the french students were following our conversation...
i dunno if he was acurate in his usage of the word, because he was known to mess up on prepositions alot, but anywho, thanks for the tid bit.
:D
can i ask a stupid question?
when you watch dbz, do u watch the same dub as us americans? i'm assuming so, but i just love hearing the different dubs and i'm trying to imagine goku talking with a different accent but in english. nothing beats the original japanese, but...yeah, anyway this is getting way too long... |_|
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god i just can't stop reading this...addicted to bossy saiyan princes and naive fools.
i just have to point out that the 9th paragraph has a typo-the last word, practice.
besides that, love it love it love it...!!!!
i just have to point out that the 9th paragraph has a typo-the last word, practice.
besides that, love it love it love it...!!!!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually it's not a typo. "practise" and "practice" are both the right spelling. Practise is a verb and practice is a noun, such as "band practice". It's also slightly different between British English and American English in that America tends to just use "practice" for both. Luckily for me, I'm British, so spelling it with an "s" was not wrong. If I was American I'd be kicking myself for getting it wrong!
Source: http://www.world-english.org/practise_practice.htm
In any case, thank you for pointing that out. In the event I was doing it wrong, I would like people to let me know, and I am really glad you did.
Source: http://www.world-english.org/practise_practice.htm
In any case, thank you for pointing that out. In the event I was doing it wrong, I would like people to let me know, and I am really glad you did.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo!!! too bad it's a one-shot :[ very nice, anyway!
and i'm sorry no one here has been appreciating your actual meaningful plot-ful writing...one star ratings? psh! they're losers anyway.
but i seem to be having the same problem with one of my stories. it's like, just because i don't have sex in every chapter, no one wants to read it. hmm...whatever happened to the good ole fanFICTION, you know, with an adventurous plot and tasteful, sexy scenes blended in when needed?
*sigh* alas, i'm preaching to the choir. for what it's worth, i love all your work. and i'm going to go re-read and re-reveiw it all to affirm this. Mm hm, mm hm! *nods*
long live thechichislaughterhouse!
and i'm sorry no one here has been appreciating your actual meaningful plot-ful writing...one star ratings? psh! they're losers anyway.
but i seem to be having the same problem with one of my stories. it's like, just because i don't have sex in every chapter, no one wants to read it. hmm...whatever happened to the good ole fanFICTION, you know, with an adventurous plot and tasteful, sexy scenes blended in when needed?
*sigh* alas, i'm preaching to the choir. for what it's worth, i love all your work. and i'm going to go re-read and re-reveiw it all to affirm this. Mm hm, mm hm! *nods*
long live thechichislaughterhouse!