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Very steamy and passionate.

I loved your style of writing, not quite describing actual sex yet making the reader picture exactly what was going on.

Excellent. Wonderful description full of passion of the moment. I like how you don't make their being together out of affection or love (which it could be, but that's not important), but out of hunger and need.

I enjoyed this. I don't normally like V/G. The pairing itself is intense, but its fandom tends to be... horrifically OOC. But you executed this without resorting to character slaughter, and for that you deserve so much thanks. Also, I love how this had more focus on points of contact, rather than mindless sex garble. It gave the interaction a more personal feel.

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