rate_review Reviews

Lol! This...was great x3

I wish there would be a sequel here. The part when Gohan said he'd be joining the two of them, it is open-ended. :) I hope you'd continue that. This is your hottest work ever. :)

its really weird...its like you crawled into my fantasys and stole them and slapped them on paper..........CUTOS TO YOU!!!! WWHHHHAAAAAAAOOO IT WAS AMAZING AND I WISH FOR YOU TO WRITE ANOTHER AND I AM HAPPY ABOUT THE LENGTH AND THE AMOUNT YOU WROTE!!!!!!! BE PROUD!!!! BUWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!

*gasp!* now i need a cold shower...a REALLY cold one...and then i´m going to read more of your stuff XD

Whew, that took so long to read but it sure was worth it. Wow, it was like reading really dirty porn. I can't imagine any of them saying half that stuff...or Goku doing ANY of that with ANYONE but that's why it's fanfiction, eh? *winks* Boy, I feel flushed and really dirty reading that. I had to stop a few times because it was really getting to me and I almost felt ashamed for enjoying it. I really love how Goten acted in this story and the entire set up and how everything led up to the really steamy ending.

Goku and Gohan talking dirty and Goten sucking cock! Oh my *blushes* I really like your stories, they're so different but in a good way! I want to read more :D But I do have a story I need to get back to but I promise I'll be back.

hey ...Thanks for the story...i think i told u this already but i wanted to comment a Thank You.....Noce Story..Extra Extra Hot

That was really really hott and sexy~

Whoa! Awesome!

hawt...DAMN!
incest is best.