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just like the title says I NEED YOU to UPDATE this fic!it is so sweet and cute[anessavanella@aim.com]

This is a very touching story, it actually brought this woman to tears reading it. I hope for more to read it's really good.

WOOHOO! Another chapter! YAY! Thanks for posting another chapter. I've been waiting forever. Great job regardless. It was worth the wait. It was a nice switch of roles though. It's normally Ed who's emotionally unstable and Roy who's the strong one. Nice job ^^ Keep it up ^^

Aaaaww!!
You gotta keep going man :D!
I really like this.. Poor Mustang :[ .
It's nice to see a slightly more mature Ed :p

*grins* I think I could easily live with those conditions too! <3 Gosh, it has been a while since I last read this. Glad to see it continuing! :) I probably would have done a bit more screaming at Roy for even thinking of doing something so drastic but I can understand why he felt that way - he believed he had no one and nothing left to live for. ;_; That's no excuse but when you hit rock bottom sometimes even stupid ideas made sense. Roy has a long way to go before he's well again but with Ed's help I think he'll get there! They are perfect for one another after all! :) More fic soon please! :)

What the...? I had a much bigger review written than just that one measly little line. Where the hell did it go? (Stupid aff review system. grr.) Damn, now I don't remember everything I just wrote. dammit. I think I said something to the effect of I would have yelled at Roy a lot more for even thinking of attempting something so stupid but that I could understand why he felt that way. When you feel like you've hit rock bottom, that you've got no one and nothing to live for, even the stupidest of ideas make sense - not that that is any kind of excuse or anything, just that I understand his mind set. It'll take time but with Ed's help I'm sure Roy will get better! They're so perfect together! More fic soon please!!

I must have more of this! I love a good depressed!Roy story, and this one is very well done!

What you stopped there?! Come on! You've got some great fics going! I'd love to see you continue them!

I love this fic and will be very happy should you decide to write more, (I am trying to be tactful and not to apply pressure).
Anyway, is this cross posted elsewhere? A 17 yr old wants to read it too. Check here http://community.livejournal.com/steelandsparks/741087.html
for reference.
Thanks for the awesome fic, Ronnie. :D

Great fic! Loved every bit so far.
Great writing style.
Also I found the flow in ch5 to be quite nice, it didn't feel crunchy at all rather it reflects the natures of Roy and Ed in distress.
Thanks for posting this, please email me (fouloldron at yahoo dot com dot au) if there's more, Ronnie. :D