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Wow,I can see why this chapter was an uphill battle for you to write. It seems to me,though I could be wrong,that the prevailing emotion was hopelessness. Each character seemed to struggle with giving into a sense of hopelessness that Duo's kidnapping would end well. For the first time Trowa,Name, and Heero each thought about what would happen if they couldn't find Duo. I think it was that sense of helplessness that prompted Name to make the call she thought she never would.
Amazingly enough, it was Duo who didn't give in to the hopelessness and helplessness. In a situation where before he would have given in this time he persevered. He realized Wes' actions didn't match his words. If he gave in he would be betraying himself and the real love he had with Heero,Name, and his friends.

I totally agree with you about Wes' behavior being stalker-ish and not loving. Even though Wes is experiencing feelings he hadn't before,he doesn't seem to realize or care that his every action is hurting Duo. That those actions are in direct contradiction to what he keeps telling Duo about loving him and not wanting to hurt him anymore. Wes is at that "if I can't have you,no one will" stage. I'm afraid if Duo keeps showing resistance Wes may decide to some serious permanent damage.

I can definately see Wes becomming less "typical villain" and more "conflicted and demented antagonist" I can't say I dislike it, though. I enjoy his viewpoints and how much he cares about Duo(in his own special way). Maybe this whole ordeal is similar to a midlife crisis for him. You know, a mid life crisis for drug dealing, pimp, thug...yeah. I am looking forward for more development between Duo and Wes, and also very curious about this person Name called.

Ah,there's the Wes we all know. Back to his old self and threatening to kill people.
Dang it,I knew Name was going to run into one Wes' cohorts at the police station. At least she has prepared herself for the fact that they may be corrupt and try to give her the run around. It's probably going to be hard for her not to resort to using less legal tactics to find Duo and handle Wes but Name is such a morally strong character that I don't believe she would stoop to violence even to handle Wes. Though with Duo being in danger and her hatred for Wes it seems like a bit of a toss up.
I wonder,now that Wes has a heads up that Name is looking,will he move Duo to a different location or will he let his arrogance and belief in his power convince him that he's untouchable?

It's always great to see an update of TRTK no matter how emotionally hard it is to sometimes read. The mark of a great story and writer is that both will engage the reader and evoke emotions. Your story does that in spades.

OMG I absolutely adore this story! Shows how bad corruption really is!

Challenge accepted! I really want a WesxDuo story so I will do my best to attempt to write one. I think we need to discuss a few things over about it though, I mean for one thing you say Wes has but hasn't changed. Ima gonna need to know how to have him. And I do take a while to type so I sort of plan to type the whole thing before I do anything with it...but every couple of pages I will send it to you so that you can look through it.

My email is ladypsycho@hotmail.co.uk. I sometimes will turn up in the junk filters though.

No matter what though you have got to update the next chapter ultra soon!

More Duo next time please though...I miss him! *snuggles him loads* Is it weird I say that after I say I want him in a relationship with Wes?

Your friend and #1 fan
PsychoSausages xxx

Ok, Heero needs to stop blaming Trowa as much as the other people. Besides he needs that energy to find Duo. I sorta saw that bit with the police coming what with all the connections Wes has. I look forward to more!

I think this story is one of my favorites out of the stories written by you. Mainly it's because you have written more here and have kept me on my toes through the entire thing. I can't wit for the other chapters to come out and hope you update this soon! I'm wondering if while Wes was going through Duo's bag he found his medications? I hope so. I don't want Duo to die simply from not taking his pills. Not that it'd be his fault, what with him all bound and thrust up in a closet and all...

Damn,this was hard to read. This chapter had me simultaneously cringing and cursing. Cringing because of what Wes was doing to Duo and cursing because Duo seemed to be falling back on all his old responses to Wes' brutality.
I have to,once again, credit your talent as a writer that you can have readers relate with a total psychotic sociopath like Wes. I totally got that this is the first time in his life he has ever felt anything for anyone beyond how he can use them. He's just as confused about his feelings as Duo though I don't think it will stop him from hurting Duo in the long run.

Poor Duo is so lost right now. He thinks just because Wes didn't brutalize him that that is an example of Wes' love. He never had a real example of love to compare it to so he wouldn't know the real thing but I see him sorting out some of this in his head. Even though he had the strength to say no to Wes' offer, I think Duo realized that five months with Heero and Name aren't going to erase eight years of physical and mental abuse. He has to face whether fall back into the familar or go forward into a frighteningly new future.

I want to express my appreciation for you contiuing this mammoth story. This is truly the type of story that could swallow your life. That you give consistent updates in addition to other stories plus have a real-life is wonderous.

OMG this story is fucking amaaaazing!

Oh this is a little request from me please please please? I know you've got Duo saying no to Wes about going away with him and thats great - you know like stand up for yourself and everything but I would absolutely adore if you'd consider writing a separate story for if Duo had actually said yes because he was too afraid of what Wes would do to Heero and Name and everything. I see a lot of domestic abuse, mind fucks and everything, not something I condone don't get me wrong but I adore how you've done Duo here and I could see so many story plots for it! And Wes leaving his businesses. He can say he will but I can see that he doesn't. Oh please please please write it for me? I will forever be your friend and I will even beta it for you if you need it!

Your friend and #1 fan
PsychoSausages xxx

so, Wes finally admitted to Duo how much he loved him(in a weird, obsessive, sociopathic way), and it really is sad that all the abuse left Dou so love starved that he was actually thinking of accepting it. I'd like to say good for Wes...but I hate his guts for doing what he did to Duo(and all the other people he abused) And with all this going on, I can't help but feel like Chris would go ape-sh*t and kill Duo if he found out about anything that happened in this chapter. He is very protective of Wes in a sociopathic bromance type of way.

And what do you mean with that comment at the end!! Is Heero not going to save him?! I mean Solo and all of them probably know where Wes lives and Heero could find them and ask! I would be so upset if Duo and Heero don't meet and finally tell each other that they love each other!(cause we all know they do) I can't wait for more!

Is it just me, or does Wes seem more talkative than he previously was? I dunno, I sometimes I forget what is going on in the long mind tangents. How will Heero find Duo without the GPS?! Maybe they GPSed the tazer? not likely, but I seriously have no idea how they would find him. And poor Duo is back in Wes' grip and now locked in a closet. I hope everything turns out ok for Duo!