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for The Road to Kindness

by shinigamiinochi

schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what kind of "evidence" the uncle will present
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for Quatre for finally telling the adorable idiot, Heero, that he was completely wrong!
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Being a Boston Girl, I am pleased with the reference of Boston. I didn't even understand those insults....I've never heard of "in-bred hick" before. Insults like that are just too stupid to acknowledge, but I'm glad Trowa turned around and beat them at their own word game....of insults....Duo and Heero are so cute together!
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Wes is an asshole. Then again, that's what the point of it is....but damn! Still love Duo and Heero. Museum of Science and Museum of Fin Arts rocks!
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That poor old man :(
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised all of them except Trowa forgot that Duo no longer had a SPLEEN! Good thing Trowa was there, and Toby, too.
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so long that it took me two days to read it 0.0' Anyways, I love the complex senerios you're putting these characters in. Duo is just too adorable and Heero is just too sweet! I love it! Also, as a big cat lover, I want to thank you for giving these cats such an important role in Duo's life.
person Djargo
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading part 1 of chapter 8 and I was so happy. Duo has grown so much emotionally. He's determined,after airing out his feelings and fears with Heero to be more open with them. Even his doubts don't take him into the deep depression they used to. He's more able to see where his dark thoughts are coming from and focus the blame where it belongs. I know he still has a long way to go but it was nice to these signs of his recovery. And three guesses to which teacher gave Duo the bad grade and the firsr two don't count^_^. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person julie
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far and is by far at the top of my favs list. Chapter 7 however, as you put it, a little long. I felt as though there was too much internal dialog. Though it was pretty juicy. I'm excited for the next chapter! Hope you can post it soon!!!! With Much Love, Biggest 1X2 Fan!!!!
person Djargo
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Chapter 7 was a long haul but well worth the wait. You have earned a well deserved break after this monster chapter.
Everything about the ending of the chapter was so cathartic. It was like you opened a pressure valve. I was very happy that all those negative feelings and emotions that were slowly poisoning everyone were addressed.
It was great when Duo realized to be a stronger person he had to face his past memories and not hide from them or let them consume him. I'm glad he also realized how much his friends love and respect him.

Now that he and Heero have confronted each about their fears and failures, it seems they have both come out a lot stronger on the other side of the gap that was between their friendship. I look forward to the next chapter in their story.
Thank you for taking the time to answer my concern of the posting of the chapters. Now I'll know where to read first^_^. Keep up the wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your talent.

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