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Wow! That was quite an emotional outpouring,even if most of it was internal not external. It was good to see Heero come to terms with his emotions and reactions. I'm glad he realised closing himself off didn't protect him;it just hurt him and the people he loved more. Instead of internalizing all his feelings,maybe he will begin to express them.
I also liked that Duo admitted,at least to himself,that he liked being his own person;a stronger person. Hopefully,he and Heero can move back towards the closeness they shared or possibly even closer.
I'll keep an eye out for the new PM chapter. Keep up the great writing and try to hold on to your optimism^_^.

WOW!! This update was well worth the wait. This story is so good but so gut-wrenching at the same time. You emote Duo's feelings so well that it can be hard to read. It's like I feel every high and low you send him through. To me that shows what an excellent writer you are,being able to get the reader to care for and empathize with the character.

I also am following Shi's story in Poisoned Memories. During the flashback, when Duo said he wasn't a baby ,I felt so bad for him because it brought his memories of his brother to the surface. All the things he'd loved and lost. Made my heart ache for him.

I was so happy that Duo broke through his training and knocked the hell outta Wes with that tree branch. He saved saved Wufei and probably the rest too. I hope he can build from the strength it took to do that.
I hope that he keeps reaching out to Heero and hope that Heero reaches back. Keep up the great writing. Looking
forward to your next update^_^.

hahaha Quatre was swearing like a drunken sailor, loved it!!

okay this took several days to read this damn chapter, though I didn't read more then a few hours at a time but damn that was long
Loved it, but .... just wow 320 pages ...

hahah Heero is an ass, and Duo isn't very friendly, love your fic so far ^__^

wow poor Duo, got a weekend to be normal and then it all went down the drain ... haha Can not wait to see what Name will do when she finds out about Duo's situation ... and heero .. scary

Hi!
I really love your story! You've completely sucked me in! Please please please post more soon! Also I check my email religously everyday if you need another beta. I'd be glad to help with that. I'm really good with editing if you would like help with that as well. Just as far as spelling and grammer is concerned. Let me know if I can help in any way. I very interested in finishing this story, and hey, I would like to do it before you are forty as well. lol. I hope to hear from you soon! Arigato!
Regards,
Tsuzuki-chan

oh this is a brilliant story! sorry i didn't review earlier. i hope you update soon because this is going in my favorites!

I think you need a beta for your beta. I don't mean it in a nasty way, just that there are quite a few mistakes that maybe everyone else skip over but I sort of stare at for a few minutes while I run through the sentence again and make it what it should be. Can't help it mind, just happens! I have to admit, I saw your story about two weeks ago and started reading it, I got hooked. When I saw you'd updated another few parts to your chapter...well what can I say? You write a lot and describe it very well! I have no complaints...when I was at work during those few weeks I rushed home at lunchtime and read another chapter! So if you want someone just to have a look over the beta'd version I don't mind. My email is r. s. taylor @ hotmail. co. uk - obviously without the spaces. I don't know how AFF work when it comes to hyperlinks in a message! I look forward to your next update!

I love your long updates, even though it drives me INSANE waiting for one. I doggedly stalk your LJ to see when you've added a bit more. I love this story that much, that i would follow it in two places. I think I read up to before Duo had his nightmare about the woman and baby out there, so I was happy to read this again out here and catch the second half.

I'm glad Trowa took what Quatre started a step farther and asked him about Heero. Watching him push Heero away makes me ache for him. Darn it, I want those two to comfort each other!

...and it takes a great author like yourself to evoke that emotion in a reader like me.