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woa this story is intense. I love it please write more.

*faints, picks up chair, sits back down, and lick lips*
I love the virus...everyone should catch it...

Holy crap. This is getting INTENSE. The plot twist with Cell? BRILLIANT. Never would have seen that coming. And the pace? Is definitely picking up. I'm a little frightened of the speed. Gokuu and Bejita are ALREADY infected, which could mean ULTIMATE DESTRUCTION of the planet between themselves, their sons, and the androids. Gohan is going to be SO PISSED at Dende when he realizes just HOW MUCH has been going on while they've been... distracted.

I actually enjoyed the length on this one. If you decide to make your chapters longer and just take a little while more to put them out, I'm sure people won't mind. This was SO worth the wait. You write and post so quickly, it's almost like not having to wait at all anyway. Great chapter! Keep it up!

OMG. I only read two chapters and I love this story. when goku took the underware ad to vegeta I laugh so loud my husband was staring at me. The story combined amusement, tight story line and steaming sex. So promising. I am luck to have anther 2 chapters to read before start to wait for update again. keep up and look forward to your next chapter.

In true Dragonball fashion, everything snowballs in the eleventh hour, from every direction, and collide in the center with a giganormous explosion. I am on the edge of my seat, waiting for it. D:

Hehe Goku's obsessed with the underwire contraption :)

Feeling sorry for 17, not able to feel and not being in control. He couldn't even tell 18 what really happened. Must be horrible trapped in your body like that. Wonder if 18 will be affected by the Hive Mind.

Ah, I wondered what that scent was that Vegeta kept smelling around the boys. Looks like things are going to get tricky come full moon. Will they be able to keep them apart? I'm wondering if Goku has already caught the virus too.

Blimey Dende's a bit forward isn't he. I guess he's pent up from waiting so long. I thought Gohan was going to refuse him but he got lost in the moment. Dende will be heart-broken when Gohan finally tells him unless he can make Gohan fall in love with him.

Loved all the scenes about the satellites and technology. Yes, in this day and age we would be lost without it. Ripe pickings for a conqueror. However, Android 10 doesn't seem as bad as I first thought. He seems not to like what his father has planned. Interesting turn of events.

How awesome to come back and to see TWO updates from you! I love all your chapters so far not a flaw in them, but I wonder how you are going to connect each side story to one another? I understand the Goku and Vegeta and the Gotenks sides intertwining but everything else seems to be separate until the find out about the androids. Guess I have to wait for the next update. Also, I also look forward to the love triangle between Gohan,Dende, and Piccolo. Although Piccolo seems not to care, I think he does cares for Gohan based on his defensiveness about him in chapter one, but he was a total dick to him in the past. I love how you have the flashbacks of piccolo and Gohan together in the story btw. Please update soon!

Loved the conversation about the underwear between Goku and Vegeta, so funny and very in character.

What's wrong with Goten and Trunks, nice lemon with Gotenks by the way, seems like some sort of fusion virus. I wonder if Goku and Vegeta will get it then, that can't be good if Goku is weakened by Chichi being ill :(

Feeling a bit sorry for Dende as he's head over heels for Gohan, and I'm worried Gohan is using him to get at Picollo.

So the army is unleashed. They don't seem very strong but there are a heck of a lot of them, which in the Saiyans weakened states could be a problem. Also interested to find out what Android 10 will do when he learns about Cell.

This keeps getting better and better! And you update so quickly! It makes the daily fic search a little more exciting, knowing that a story like this one is on the frequent hit list. ;)

I don't usually like OCs, but Juu-gou (Android 10) has depth; it's always nice to have an antagonist that isn't /precisely/ a villain--and besides, absolute good versus absolute evil is boring. Also: curious and curiouser about that virus and what it might have to do with Fusion. The suspense is killing me and the more you leave me to speculate, the scarier my theories get. XD;

ETC, ETC... running a little short on time, but I just had to throw that out there, while I was thinking on it. I tend to forget and this story is just too awesome to go without feedback. ♥ (And on that note, thanks for your review on "Kisses." I do have some longer fics in revision. I've just been a little distracted, recently. XD;)

SQUEE! i was right. piccolo and gohan, sittin in a tree...
and vegeta...poor guy, he's gonna burst a blood vessel.
nice halucination. nothing better than loving yourself! lol