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for A Twist on Teasing

by lordofthepies

person Anon
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and a pairing I've never read before! It's definitely something I liked to see. For some reason I really liked that this was set in Hell...I dunno, it's just a great setting for some reason. The lemon scene was really sexy and hot and I liked the way it was written; not really too smutty or over done but just enough to let the reader feel satisfied. Also, once again, the ending line was perfect. Goku was such a tease! ^^

Love always,

Talitha.
person emudii
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. That was PERFECT. You totally NAILED Gokuu (LOL). He's such a simple guy—so much that people often forget that he's terribly crafty and sometimes downright manipulative. This was a SHINING example of that hidden side of his nature. SO. MUCH. LOVE. ♥
person CrimsonTide
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Now YOU are teasing. I've seen this fic posted three times now and I keep getting excited thinking it's a new fic with this couple... and it's the same fic each time. Quit teasing...
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep. Still like it. Such a fabulous pairing. Turles is so wonderfully cocky and Goku gets his way as usual. You're going to illustrate it, aren't you? *puppy eyes*

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