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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is astounding. Really, you write just BEAUTIFULLY. I felt my heart catch while reading it. Please, please continue this story.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good job setting up the story premise. I continue to be entertained by your high quality writing style. Now onto chapter 2!
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I heartily enjoyed the second chapter and how Bulma undressed an intoxicated Vegeta. Your level of description is just perfect. You didn't need a lemon in this, and I look forward to seeing more angles of their relationship explored with your wonderful writing.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Hope you continue it!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I love it! Please continue!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw come on! You gotta have more to it than that! More... more... MORE!! LOL It looks great so far and I am eager to read.... well, more. Let me know when you post on this again? talene02002@yahoo.com