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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story it compliments my dark side.... it is well written no to wordy or to indepth and i like that... i would hate to see Duo broke though...
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! Dammit, why did it end?! Sorry, I just recall reading the first chapter a while ago I think, and now suddenly..MORE WOO and then it stopped, le sigh.
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, Heero is really fucked up... and idiot. Well, at least he realized that Relena was not Duo... and he couldn't pretend she was.
I was so mad for what he did to Duo. I really don't know how to think of him... sometimes, I think Duo is weak, but I can see why he is and I can't blame him... But Heero is mean. He deserved everything Duo said to him and all the reactions he got. Hope he suffers more hahahaha
Sorry it took me so long to review, but here I am ^^ It was very well written and I'm waiting for more soon ^^
Hugs!
I was so mad for what he did to Duo. I really don't know how to think of him... sometimes, I think Duo is weak, but I can see why he is and I can't blame him... But Heero is mean. He deserved everything Duo said to him and all the reactions he got. Hope he suffers more hahahaha
Sorry it took me so long to review, but here I am ^^ It was very well written and I'm waiting for more soon ^^
Hugs!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My Hee-chan T_T
Poor Heero, I'm glad you showed his softer side finally, thank goodness.
I still want to vomit though, like Heero did after wards.
Ugh.
I feel satisfied that he thought of Duo and compared her to him the whole time.
I'm glad the chapter was a good character development of Heero though, you know how I am.
I love my hee-chan, no matter how bad he may be in a story.
Very awesome.
I am looking forward to see how all these events outcomes are... even though I know the general idea of where some of the things are going already, I want to know how they become that way now.
Write more Titties.
Poor Heero, I'm glad you showed his softer side finally, thank goodness.
I still want to vomit though, like Heero did after wards.
Ugh.
I feel satisfied that he thought of Duo and compared her to him the whole time.
I'm glad the chapter was a good character development of Heero though, you know how I am.
I love my hee-chan, no matter how bad he may be in a story.
Very awesome.
I am looking forward to see how all these events outcomes are... even though I know the general idea of where some of the things are going already, I want to know how they become that way now.
Write more Titties.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so after reading the two last chapters I am quite addicted to this story... and then it stopped and I was left with nothing again.
I'm sad now, I want to know what Heero does next.
I really like the POV changes between Heero and Duo, it makes the story more interesting and not so one sided.
And as I said while you were sitting down playing Pi Story on the computer earlier, i like how the tones and themes of the story are obvious for people like myself who don't catch things if it's not quite obvious and out in the open.
I demand another... 10 chapters now!! (cracks her whip)
Get to it little servant!
(kidding... or am I?)
I'm sad now, I want to know what Heero does next.
I really like the POV changes between Heero and Duo, it makes the story more interesting and not so one sided.
And as I said while you were sitting down playing Pi Story on the computer earlier, i like how the tones and themes of the story are obvious for people like myself who don't catch things if it's not quite obvious and out in the open.
I demand another... 10 chapters now!! (cracks her whip)
Get to it little servant!
(kidding... or am I?)
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First up I'd like to say how much I'm enjoying this fic. You have an interesting plot line going that's very indepth and involved. I can easily see both guys falling into the parts you have them playing, war does some pretty horrible things to grown mens' minds, let alone teenagers.
Secondly the person that left the review obviously has nothing better to do with their time than pick on decent authors writing decent fics. No one has the right to tell you what you should or shouldn't be writing. It's your story, your plot line and your right to do with it as you see fit. Let's face it, we all have our own interpretation of the guys from the series and that's what makes this world of fanfiction so interesting. With so many different interpretations of the guys we have a rich and diverse abundance of fics to read. Yes, I like soft and sappy, I also enjoy a good angst fic too. I'm not keen on death fics and it's my choice not to read them. Doesn't mean I'm saying the author isn't any good or having a go at them for writing a death fic. Everyone has a choice to read or not and if, after reading a few lines you are feeling uncomfortable with the subject matter - fine - don't read any more, but certainly don't go abusing the author for their choice of material.
Fanfiction is supposed to be a freedom of speech and choice - let's keep it that way.
Having put my two cents worth in (and feeling better for it - I hate flamers) I sincerely hope you continue. Not only is this something dark and different, it's also well written (odd spelling and grammar issue but we all are guilty of those; I know I am!)and I'm finding it very educational as well.
Good luck to you!
*hugs and Gundam Pilots*
Shen ^_^
www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com
The home of ShenLong
Secondly the person that left the review obviously has nothing better to do with their time than pick on decent authors writing decent fics. No one has the right to tell you what you should or shouldn't be writing. It's your story, your plot line and your right to do with it as you see fit. Let's face it, we all have our own interpretation of the guys from the series and that's what makes this world of fanfiction so interesting. With so many different interpretations of the guys we have a rich and diverse abundance of fics to read. Yes, I like soft and sappy, I also enjoy a good angst fic too. I'm not keen on death fics and it's my choice not to read them. Doesn't mean I'm saying the author isn't any good or having a go at them for writing a death fic. Everyone has a choice to read or not and if, after reading a few lines you are feeling uncomfortable with the subject matter - fine - don't read any more, but certainly don't go abusing the author for their choice of material.
Fanfiction is supposed to be a freedom of speech and choice - let's keep it that way.
Having put my two cents worth in (and feeling better for it - I hate flamers) I sincerely hope you continue. Not only is this something dark and different, it's also well written (odd spelling and grammar issue but we all are guilty of those; I know I am!)and I'm finding it very educational as well.
Good luck to you!
*hugs and Gundam Pilots*
Shen ^_^
www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com
The home of ShenLong
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! Please? I really like this...
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story^^
I would love to read more!
Please feel free to e-mail me if you need some sort of beta (even though I really don't think you need it, but if you want it I'm here)
I would love to read more!
Please feel free to e-mail me if you need some sort of beta (even though I really don't think you need it, but if you want it I'm here)