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by Kali

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok it's way to late/early to write a huge review but it really only needs one word to describe your writing, BRILLIANT!!! I love these, they are absolutly ace. I loved number 8 ??? the convo fic, my dirty mind didn't cotton on until about halfway through that it was Kai's scarf they were talking about. I almost fell out of my chair. I love the idea of Kai and Tyson on a motorbike, there is just something so hot about it although I'm not sure I'd let Tyson do the driving XD
Ok, so much for the not long review. I think that will do. Thank you for the update and I look forward to the next one.
person JynX87
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!
person Kiotana
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze! Great job! You keep it so in character. I'm still impressed! ^-^
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!!

I think that covers it really. I really like your writing and I can understand why you would have trouble writing short pieces. The first one where Tyson was meeting the family I thought was gonna be longer. I was quite surprised when it ended. Usually I would say but so and so one was my favourate but they were all so fantastic that I just love them all. I can't wait for the rest.

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