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Gods I never get tired of reading this story *winks* Do you ever consider posting it on Archives of Our Own? Please do so I can recommend it and bookmark it, so I can read it whenever I want it *grins*

Kisses from Argentina

Vegeta and Bulma; HOT. 

Wow. I can just say that: wow.
This story took my breath away.

I must say, I wasn't into G/V/B threesomes, but I got curious. So glad I did. I'm officially a fan now.

Just plain amazing. And hot. So hot.

Keep writing! You're really good.

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story!! I can't TELL you how many times I've read it~!! It's just so well written. I love your style, your voice, your portrayal of the characters, of the scenes, of their emotions!!! [the sex is ok too hahahaha >_<]
I pretty much think of this story as the mother of all PWP. Is it about about sex? Absolutely. However as fans of the series, we know who these characters are, what their motivations and aspirations are. So even in a AU story your still need to keep at least 'some' part of that character alive. But here, with one mere chapter you did that and then some.
With this simple short [but ve~ry hot] story you m'lady put most authors to shame.
Well done. I just wish you'd still write T^T
Thanks for an awesome read.

BTW, I should also mention that this story single handedly made me go back to drawing, and I've been attempting [unsuccessfully] to draw a doujin out of it haha. Truly inspirational I guess hahaha. So thanks for that too ♥

Wow. Just wow. You really captured the relationship between the three of them prefectly. The G/V rivaly felt true to the series and even it's "resolution" didn't seem forced or unrealistic. Really fantastic!

I could have sworn I reviewed this...but apparently not, lol. I love this story - it's utterly delicious to read and you write all their characters so sexy. You're great and your story is fantastic.

That was incredibly hot! I have always found the scenario of a 3some relationship with this characters mind-blowing. I liked the idea, Goku and Bulma had a one-night-stand in the past. Her attraction to him is obvious in canon anyway, and I think it's a shame ppl don't use it in this kind of FF more.

So I can overlook the little plot flaw (if Goku knows everything about Vegeta after the fusion, why doesn't Vegeta know about Goku's episode with Bulma??), and enjoy the smut with the right amount of character development in-between that makes this story more enjoyable than the average PWP!

I will make sure to read your other work (I think I read your name somewhere anyway, so it's possible I have already read sth from you)!

My regards, Blackivy

*loves* By far the best Gk/B/V fic I've ever read. (There should be more!) It wasn't just smut - it was -believable- smut. Everyone was very in character, and the story flowed wonderfully despite a few grammatical errors. (Oh man, can you tell I'm an English major? ^^;) It was hot, and sexy, and wonderful, and I really hope to see more from you.

I LOVE Bulma/Vegeta/Goku love triangles, in this order too! It was PERFEECT, and that's really all I have to say.

I liked it! It was long but it was really good. There were some grammar problems but they were easily overlooked. I thought this story was extremely sexy and I loved how you made it a triangle. The way you wrote it was intriguing and had me reading the entire way. I loved how Vegeta and Bulma interacted together and I love how Goku came into the story. It was hot to see Vegeta and Goku get it on ;) And then all three of them together was just stunning.

Good story! You should be pleased :D