rate_review Reviews

the story is definately interesting. it seems that you could turn this story into a multitude of directions, so i will be sticking with it to see how it turns out. good job so far! *thumbs up + Gai's freaky sparkle smile*

You're right about these two being EXTREMELY OBVIOUS. I've had my fair share of people say that—particularly those who don't actually support yaoi.

I'm a little conflicted by how this is unfolding. On the one hand, we all knew that growing up with too much money, too much drama, and two whacked out parents would give Trunks ISSUES. And of course being a poor country boy would shelter Goten and allow him to be a sweetheart idealist. But this is razor sharp... as devoted as Goten is, I keep expecting him to walk out and for their friendship to take a serious blow. There is a LOT of verbal abuse going on, and being tripped out on coke like that, I would assume that that is the real way Trunks feels about his best friend. Nasty.

Caprice!!!!

I can't believe you are here! Is my prayer to god finally answered? No I am kidding I don't pray something like that. Anyway I never ever expected in next million years you are going to write yaoi. I thought you are hard core het fan.

But welcome! *threw both arms open*. I guess you were a bit like me. I was hard core het fan until two years ago. Then ban! like I hit my head on the bedboard, or something strange happened in my life, I started to check yaoi stories and got hooked. Here I am. Who knows what life will bing. Let's just enjoy whatever DB can bring.

Now run over to read your story.

Interesting interact. I like how both denying theri attraction while there are clearly some. They will make cute couple, with Trunks sofistication and Goten's pure and innocence.