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for Oh Kami!

by DarkSerapha

schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^^


Great great great story... it really made me laugh and the idea is just brilliant!
Thank you so much ^.^

Bye
Raphaela
person Tru6768
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A really unique idea, and an enjoyable, well-written story. I just loved it :)
person Zofo
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I haven't laughed like that in ages. What a unique story.

Loved the part where he was clinging to Goku, telling him not to change and how wonderful Vegeta was to only think of training.

Great ending too, I had an inkling that it was Picollo, but didn't expect him to come on to Dende.

I look forward to your re-posts and new stories.
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING HYSTERICAL!!!
OMG i love it!! hahahaha poor dende but then again he likes it...hahahahahaha!!
awesome!
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, giggled all the way through.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a clever and unique story!

And poor Dende, lol! That must be... well.. I'D enjoy watching certain people go at it, but it still must be freaky to hear people's thoughts because they're calling out your name, hehe!

So glad to see you writing again ^.^

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