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actually the japanese word "koi" has a few meanings.
Japanese English
koi carp
koi request
koi love, tender passion
koi ancient ways, the feelings of the ancients
koi intention, purpose, bad faith
koi thick, dense, strong
also how would u know if japanese ppl use the word koibito or not? its a great story though. ill have to check out the sequel.

What a gloriously long lemon. Don't know why you didn't like it as I thought it was great.

I too prefer a seme Vegeta, but don't mind reading him as uke (as long as it's with Goku) and you made it very believable. Was very touching in the end as well when their minds and souls merged.

Hope you post the sequel and it is about Vegeta's revenge on Shenron? *sniggers at the possibilities*

I thought I'd read your story and return the favor since you reviewed mine! *giggles* This first chapter was pretty funny. You're right, Shenlong was pretty out of character but in the most hilarious way possible. Vegeta's questions were pretty funny because I kinda wondered that too. Imagine making the great eternal dragon do something as stupid as tying himself in a knot or something of the sort. Though that wish can't be as stupid as Oolongs "underwear" wish in Dragonball. *falls over laughing at the memory*

As for the odd way the dragon was acting when Vegeta made his wishes...well that's making me a bit nervous. I wonder what the giant lizard is up to. *rubs chin*

And I almost feel sorry for Goku, judging by the way Vegeta is acting. Oh it should be good! Well, I'm off to read chapter two!

Oooh good chapter. Plenty of great detail and now I'm wondering what's going to happen next so I'm gonna cut this review short and rush to the next chapter!

Hey! That was a damn good lemon if I do say so myself. I'm no expert on them but I can tell when I read a good lemon. I don't even LIKE lemons that much but you had me reading yours all the way through. Great job. As for Vegeta being uke, well it's strange but I see it happening once in awhile. It wouldn't be fair if Goku was ALWAYS on the bottom ;) And it was hot *fans self*

Excellent work, I enjoyed reading this.

Very nice story. I was listening to eye of the tiger whilst reading this too. I looked an amv up of vegeta and goku to go with it while i read xP
I love how you made Goku the tiger and Vegeta the panther and even though you are shocked you wrote Vegeta as uke I'm really glad you did, as this was a great story and I'm not a fan of seme Vegeta and wouldn't have looked for it if my friend hadn't linked me ^^
So great story overall and great job on the descriptions ^_^

O.o That was the first lemon you wrote? Daaaaaamn! Any way, yes, a bit over the top, but fun to read all the same! :D I am glad you decided to post this story on AFF - other wise I may not have every seen it - or enjoyed reading it. Lovely! Thank you!

OOOOOOOoooo! Big cats! :D I think I do like Shenron's tastes.

Oh this is getting good!

Like how you portray Goku, more intelligent than he lets on, but for a reason, and how he purposely tried not to think of Vegeta that way as he wasn't as skilled in masking his thoughts from Vegeta.

Sniggered at Shenron, never taunt a dragon, let that be a lesson to you Vegeta. Though some of Vegeta's suggestions for wishes would have been fun to see :)

I love what you've turned them into, especially Vegeta, some how that really suits him. How will he fare now that Goku once again has the upper hand though.

Can't wait for more!

LOL, the dragon really amused me - I wonder what it's done with their tails...

I also like the explanations about Bulma and Chichi, and also Goku reading.

There are only a couple of things about Vegeta that were a little OOC (like using "gotcha" or calling out "oyasumi nasai" a little happily.

I'm looking forward to reading more, definitely. Must find out how Goku reacts. XDD