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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh, must know what happens next. please update soon. ive already lost major sleep on this fic.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear Tammy,
WOW! I have thought I am not going to read another "BV get together" voluntarily in my lifetime, but your story is really captivating. I like the original plot and the way you develop it. You definitely have a knack for building up tension!
Thumbs up and keep on updating!
WOW! I have thought I am not going to read another "BV get together" voluntarily in my lifetime, but your story is really captivating. I like the original plot and the way you develop it. You definitely have a knack for building up tension!
Thumbs up and keep on updating!
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You ask if you're on the right track... the answer is a resounding "YES"
Keep up the good work and don't let them sleep to late, please. We are all waiting.
Please contact me, there is a email link on my site near the bottom of the home page. I'd like to talk to you about your fic.
Ginia
SaiyanDelite
http://www.saiyanhideaway.us/Delite/MainPages/home.html
Keep up the good work and don't let them sleep to late, please. We are all waiting.
Please contact me, there is a email link on my site near the bottom of the home page. I'd like to talk to you about your fic.
Ginia
SaiyanDelite
http://www.saiyanhideaway.us/Delite/MainPages/home.html
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving the story. keep going!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're writing is extremely good considering English isn't your first language! I'm loving the story, though I'd told myself I wouldn't like any "Bulma as a Saiyan" fics...
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! don't leave it hanging too long!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Girl!!! you're obviously on the right track, the trama is amazing, the cliffhangers are good and at this point, anything that you think is right will be right because you are making it insanely well. Oh, and the lemon scene was really good so you can make more of those! but next time with our beloved one (Vegeta). I'll be checking daily for the next chapter.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic,I love to see Bulma being a saiyan and be so strong and respected, and I love the jerkiness of Vegeta. You did a great job!
................ now MOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!
................ now MOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like the premise of the story and so far I'm enjoying how it's written. The description is pretty good, nice amount of detail and not too much either. One thing that bugs me is that you don't seem to use any punctuation marks after your dialogue. Normally periods or commas, depending on which is needed, are used.
Example:
"I'm going to the store," she said.
OR.
"I'll be back later."
That's how it should be written in stories.
Keep up the really great work! I look forward to seeing where this goes. You've got talent and I want to see how you bring this plot about.
Love always,
Talitha.
Example:
"I'm going to the store," she said.
OR.
"I'll be back later."
That's how it should be written in stories.
Keep up the really great work! I look forward to seeing where this goes. You've got talent and I want to see how you bring this plot about.
Love always,
Talitha.