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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...>:3 oh, edward you tease~
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh Zakai you tease!!! I normally dont like chapter fics but this NEEDS more. -loves- I love it, its all erotic and falsely innocent at the same time. I love your work. I think just one chapter of them getting it on after a "meeting" like that.. .would be absolutely amazing!! <3
I plead for your to write at least one chapter after this one!! <3
I plead for your to write at least one chapter after this one!! <3
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I got to the end of the story, my first thoughts were "Ooh, Ed, you're evil! Turning Colonel Hottie on like that and then not finishing what you started! So Cruel!" Great story!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bung bang!! OMG to de WUUUURRLL! Ed mek it. jah know star, i FELT roy's confusion arousal so easily haha 'im a big boy now' whoo. awesome.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
astounding as usual, you never disappoint!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent imagery. Please continue this. It is great.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can always take something so simple and turn it into something erotic. Very, very hot. I don't want this to be a oneshot.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, and amusing to boot. I would say this wins.
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no, no, NO! You can't stop right there! AH! Mean, just plain mean! More, please? *puppy-eyes* Oh, and incase you didn't figure it out, veeeery nice chapter. Leaves me wanting more like Roy haha.
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good! Is this a one-shot or is there going to be more to it? If so, looking forward to the next chapter.