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I really, really wish this story had been finished. You have one of the best Pan/Trunks stories out there and thank god it's  not another 'because of the saiyan side or I'm pregnant." I hope you continue this since DB is as popular as ever especially with Super now being dubbed.

 

You have ruined me for all other trunks/pan writers ^.^ You capture the trunks personality perfectly :D you are an awesome writer, I can't wait to read more trunks/pan stories from you :3

Awsome! Keep going!

I'm so glad to see Trunks and Pan are out of that cage! Now that they have their ki abilities back, I don't see how anything can stop them! It doesn't seem like this alien race that was holding them captive is exceedingly strong. Anyway, I loved how they got the attention of the guards by having loud sex. Really, I could just hear Trunks saying, "That's how I like it" lol. I laughed at that :) Very cute. I also think it's so sweet how Trunks always wants to protect Pan even when she can do it herself. I liked that little touch at the end where he tried to pick her up to fly and was embarrassed when she reminded him she can fly, too :)

Looking forward to your next update.

Wow, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how trunks and pan will get themselves out of this one. Or how trunks will be humiliated by the aliens...hehe...is it wrong that I would sorta enjoy seeing that? :-P I loved that comment about how goku will steal all the credit, as usual, for their rescue hahaha. I'm also loving the little flashbacks you've inserted where they remember moments in their past, like trunks likening his sick feeling from being captured to a bender he and goten had. I loved that. It's good comic relief and also gets us closer to all of the characters. By the way, you have a great read on all of them and I really feel like I am watching an episode of GT when I read this. Only better, lol. I'm *dying* to see what gohan's rxn will be to all of this. Oh and I loved how you mentioned videl being a DA!!! What an absolutely perfect job for a grown-up superhero :) Hell, that's exactly why I always wanted to be one hehehe. Awesome touches. Keep up the good work.

Another chapter yeay! Keep going cause this story is awsome!

wow. This is really great. One of the best stories I've read for a long time. Can't wait for the next update

Keep going with this story it`s good!

loved it!

please update soon!! one of the best trunks/pan stories around!!!