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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome new chapter! Keep going!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter.
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey you! Well, I had promised you that I would check out this story and since I saw it was updated when I signed onto AFF this morning, I figured I might as well make good on that promise. So, I held my breath, put my anti-Pan feelings and my firm belief that Trunks only likes boys aside and read Chapter 1. And I must say, I was pleasantly surprised :-D We were talking yesterday about characterization, and I have to say you did a great job with adult present Trunks here. He is very much like he was in GT, but with a stronger personality (thank god!). A really believable and sexy portrayal.
I like the dynamic between Trunks and Pan as well, with her needing discipline and him being quite disciplined, and the two of them both needing release and being stuck on this tiny ship together. It's quite hot. I liked how he pulled her into his bedroom like that. God, to be Pan at that moment *sigh* Also with him being older and more experienced and teaching her how to enjoy her body and such. Yup, even though I didn't want to, I found myself really enjoying the sex scene very much. I especially liked this line:
"I can't," she protested, wriggling but uncomfortable with his substantial girth.
"You can," Trunks whispered. "You fit me perfectly Pan."
It was sweet, but it also showed Trunks in that position of control which I find very sexy and really enjoy reading. Anyway, bravo on an excellent chapter. The fact that I enjoyed this even though I had every intention not to (haha) really puts me in awe of your abilities as a writer. Keep up the good work!
Now, must go read some Truten to erase these blasphemous het images from my head.... LOL ;-)
I like the dynamic between Trunks and Pan as well, with her needing discipline and him being quite disciplined, and the two of them both needing release and being stuck on this tiny ship together. It's quite hot. I liked how he pulled her into his bedroom like that. God, to be Pan at that moment *sigh* Also with him being older and more experienced and teaching her how to enjoy her body and such. Yup, even though I didn't want to, I found myself really enjoying the sex scene very much. I especially liked this line:
"I can't," she protested, wriggling but uncomfortable with his substantial girth.
"You can," Trunks whispered. "You fit me perfectly Pan."
It was sweet, but it also showed Trunks in that position of control which I find very sexy and really enjoy reading. Anyway, bravo on an excellent chapter. The fact that I enjoyed this even though I had every intention not to (haha) really puts me in awe of your abilities as a writer. Keep up the good work!
Now, must go read some Truten to erase these blasphemous het images from my head.... LOL ;-)
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!please update soon!!!!!1!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I normally don't like T/P but I actually really liked this <3 I was just stopping by to tell you that I added 3 more chapters to my G/P fic if you wanted to check it out. You should write a G/P I always like dreading other people work :)
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work.
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really is one of the best stories I've read in a long while.