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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
uh... funny? very very strange pairing...
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAH!! that was brilliant!! XD XD I laughed so hard i could barely breath.
That Vegeta really is a scoundral XD Thanks for a funny fic!!
That Vegeta really is a scoundral XD Thanks for a funny fic!!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shenrons internal musings at the start were so funny, and it was humorous throughout :)
Shenron and Porunga, aww, even dragons find love. What will Porguna make of this though !!! Can he do anything about it, wishes having to be obeyed an all?
So Nappa has a thing for green, does that mean he had a thing for Zarbon? Also, am I the only one wishing for a lemon between Shenron and Oozaru Nappa? *sighs* I probably am!
Excellent revenge on Vegeta's part. I love it!
Thanks for the re-post :)
Shenron and Porunga, aww, even dragons find love. What will Porguna make of this though !!! Can he do anything about it, wishes having to be obeyed an all?
So Nappa has a thing for green, does that mean he had a thing for Zarbon? Also, am I the only one wishing for a lemon between Shenron and Oozaru Nappa? *sighs* I probably am!
Excellent revenge on Vegeta's part. I love it!
Thanks for the re-post :)
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loool revolving doors. That was a pretty funny image. I love the way you portray Shenlong, it's always worth a few laughs and giggles. I loved how the Dragon was getting really into himself, thinking about his talons and his scales and feeling really proud of his appearance. Who woulda thought the Eternal Dragon was THAT self-absorbed.
Also, I was thinking the same thing. The moon DOES get blown up a lot. I remember at least one occasion in Dragonball and about two in DBZ HAHAHA. "Let's blow it up" Honestly.
And now onto the most important part of the fic...
Ahem...
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NAPPA AND THE DRAGON? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
*clears throat* Sorry but that has to be the weirdest, funniest thing I've ever read. Vegeta DOES have a sense of humor. A very strange...humor but humor none the less. Oh man, to think...That really was quite the payback.
*rubs head*
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NAPPA AND THE DRAGON!!!!
*brain go boom*
Anyway, great story. Just one thing I'd like to point out. You keep misusing the word "loose". Loose is when something is baggy or doesn't fit snuggly or something like that. "His jeans were loose around his waist." The word you are looking for is "lose". To lose something, misplace it. "I think I'm going to lose my mind."
Just thought I'd point that out.
Love always,
Talitha.
Also, I was thinking the same thing. The moon DOES get blown up a lot. I remember at least one occasion in Dragonball and about two in DBZ HAHAHA. "Let's blow it up" Honestly.
And now onto the most important part of the fic...
Ahem...
....
NAPPA AND THE DRAGON? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
*clears throat* Sorry but that has to be the weirdest, funniest thing I've ever read. Vegeta DOES have a sense of humor. A very strange...humor but humor none the less. Oh man, to think...That really was quite the payback.
*rubs head*
....
NAPPA AND THE DRAGON!!!!
*brain go boom*
Anyway, great story. Just one thing I'd like to point out. You keep misusing the word "loose". Loose is when something is baggy or doesn't fit snuggly or something like that. "His jeans were loose around his waist." The word you are looking for is "lose". To lose something, misplace it. "I think I'm going to lose my mind."
Just thought I'd point that out.
Love always,
Talitha.