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by KahlanN

person Salza
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful odd-couple story - I think your characterization here was pretty well spot-on, and more than that, this was fun to read. I found myself laughing out loud at the dialogue throughout, which is quite a feat where I'm concerned. Nice explanation for what they were doing on the iceberg, too - great, great moments in indignity. I love it.
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute. i like how this conversation really could have happened. :)
person Zofo
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those two on the iceberg is one of my favorite bits. I always rewind it several times when I watch that film as it's so funny.

Liked the banter between them in your story and the way Vegeta acted when he realised what Picollo was trying to do. He totally ran with it knowing he could overwhelm Picollo with his experience. Trust Vegeta to take advantage :)

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