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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so adorable and lighthearted and.. FLUFFY. Loved it. Wonderful contrapoint to the earlier angst. Mmmmh.. looking forward to the final chapter now.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"I've never been a kept man before"
"Oh, I'm keeping you all right.."
*squeals* that was cute, in a kinda kinky way.and i can't wait for the next scene, cause you make some dan good lemons.... *drools*
oh... and i love whta he did with the exploding pen. very classic of what i'd see Veggie doing. lol.
GREAT CHAPPIE!!!
"Oh, I'm keeping you all right.."
*squeals* that was cute, in a kinda kinky way.and i can't wait for the next scene, cause you make some dan good lemons.... *drools*
oh... and i love whta he did with the exploding pen. very classic of what i'd see Veggie doing. lol.
GREAT CHAPPIE!!!
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay handcuffs
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was giggling at Vegeta's wise cracks in this, shame Brolli stopped them.
Liked how Kakarot found out how to go Super Saiyan, what a quick observant guy he is. Brolli sounded like a spoiled brat bully after that. Vegeta obviously loved it, wonder if he make Kakarot go SS after the kids are in bed :)
Oooh an evil Yardratian! I had the impression they were peaceful like Nameks. A bad apple maybe.
Liked how Kakarot found out how to go Super Saiyan, what a quick observant guy he is. Brolli sounded like a spoiled brat bully after that. Vegeta obviously loved it, wonder if he make Kakarot go SS after the kids are in bed :)
Oooh an evil Yardratian! I had the impression they were peaceful like Nameks. A bad apple maybe.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow me like
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well well well... and the lengendary appears. ^-^ They're stoped by a LOCKED door Hahahahaha!!!! ^-^
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Vegeta's sushi line - he certainly enjoys his work. :) And Brolli calling him a bunny rabbit is too funny.
Of course Vegeta would think of sex with Kakarott in the middle of a fight. Who wouldn't? :D And not having gotten to the handcuffs yet... Does this mean we get to see them play with handcuffs? Promise?
Of course Vegeta would think of sex with Kakarott in the middle of a fight. Who wouldn't? :D And not having gotten to the handcuffs yet... Does this mean we get to see them play with handcuffs? Promise?
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And Veggie creamed himself... that was perfect..... *snickers*
Have i said lately that i love your stuff and can't get enough of both your smut, and your humour? *ponders* bad me. i need to review more often.
On the other hand, i liked the fight, and since i barely remember what brolli looked like, i had to make my own mental pictures from your descriptions. hehe. bad boy, him.
And for my other favorite.
“Run, little rabbit!” Brolli roared. “I’ll eat your liver.”
Vegeta liked his liver right where it was. Besides, this rabbit had fangs.
Actually, that line gives me ideas for a fic i'm writing... and a certain demon fox. *chuckles* i hope you don't mind darlin, but you are inspirational! Until next chapter!!
Have i said lately that i love your stuff and can't get enough of both your smut, and your humour? *ponders* bad me. i need to review more often.
On the other hand, i liked the fight, and since i barely remember what brolli looked like, i had to make my own mental pictures from your descriptions. hehe. bad boy, him.
And for my other favorite.
“Run, little rabbit!” Brolli roared. “I’ll eat your liver.”
Vegeta liked his liver right where it was. Besides, this rabbit had fangs.
Actually, that line gives me ideas for a fic i'm writing... and a certain demon fox. *chuckles* i hope you don't mind darlin, but you are inspirational! Until next chapter!!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum. Cream puffs. *grins
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Nice intense fight! :) Wonderfully discribed. *is drooling with Vegeta*