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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was too easy for Vegeta in the deathtraps, did Babidi really think that would stop him? Made me laugh when his tail got hit. That must have stung :) And the sharks names cracked me up :)
Why didn't Gohan follow the plan? Silly boy he's put them all in danger now as Kakarot will be distracted by his new found parental instincts!
Time for Vegeta to come to the rescue :)
Why didn't Gohan follow the plan? Silly boy he's put them all in danger now as Kakarot will be distracted by his new found parental instincts!
Time for Vegeta to come to the rescue :)
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow lots of action
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAH!!! TOO SHORT!!!
Good all the same though. *smirks* Vegeta wandering through all those 'traps' and his snarky thoughts about them made me smile.
If Gohan has visions you'd have thought Kakarott would have done something differently than what Gohan had seen - but that's just me.
Good all the same though. *smirks* Vegeta wandering through all those 'traps' and his snarky thoughts about them made me smile.
If Gohan has visions you'd have thought Kakarott would have done something differently than what Gohan had seen - but that's just me.
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh. Interesting, very interesting.
...Although I admit i have no idea how they got Goku's dna (or whatever) or why they chose him or what exactly made Goku thnk they were his sons 9rather than simple, evil experiments). Is that going to be explained later?
...Although I admit i have no idea how they got Goku's dna (or whatever) or why they chose him or what exactly made Goku thnk they were his sons 9rather than simple, evil experiments). Is that going to be explained later?
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did Babidi actually think that those PUNY traps would hold VEGETA!!!!!! O.O man what an idiot. And of course Gohan HAD to reveal his and Goten's position by crying out for no reason.
well keep up the good work. ^-^
^-^ see ya ^-^
well keep up the good work. ^-^
^-^ see ya ^-^
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow adding in gohan was surprising, but i must say that i feel sorry for him...being raised by babibi.
worse thing that can ever happen to a kid is being raised by a evil little bug looking thing.
worse thing that can ever happen to a kid is being raised by a evil little bug looking thing.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved how Vegeta had all those gadgets hidden on him - so James Bond, and the closing walls in the pit trap was perfect :)
Nice play on Gohan's name, took me a moment to get it. Personally I'd rather be raised by Babidi, at least you'd have some fun in an evil way.
Can't wait to read what other deathtraps you have planned for them :)
Nice play on Gohan's name, took me a moment to get it. Personally I'd rather be raised by Babidi, at least you'd have some fun in an evil way.
Can't wait to read what other deathtraps you have planned for them :)
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and i can't wait for the next chapter.. i was actually wondering if you were going to include Gohan or Goten in this.. :D Very very james bond, too. Almost a functional inspector gadget.
I love it
I love it
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well ^-^ this is interesting. -_- poor Gohan. Hmmmm... I gotta say it's hard to tell because... If you mean one of the bitch Chi-chi's then it's pretty much a tie BUT if it's the real Chi-chi then being raised by Chi-chi is better.
Well Keep up the good work ^-^
see ya ^-^
Well Keep up the good work ^-^
see ya ^-^
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha... brilliant! Babidi is such a dork. I always thought he was a rather incompetent villain. Oh, so it's Gohan! It sounded a bit like cloning so I was kind of expecting Turles. Mmh.. threesomes...