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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GYAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! ^-^ You are such a TEASE ^-^ can't wait for the rest ^-^
^-^ Keep up the good work ^-^
(Moiira...Zee's at her Boyfriend's place...)
^-^ Keep up the good work ^-^
(Moiira...Zee's at her Boyfriend's place...)
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more with every passing chapter. Not only did you bring in the shapeshifters - I always found it really funny how everyone made such a fuss about saiyan tails when apparently a nice chunk of Chikiyuu-sei's population had tails - but you also gave this story a background that really makes a lot of sense. And Piccolo was just brilliant. I totally think he'd thrive as a sour-looking dry elder in a monastery-like environment. This is so much fun!
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So will we get to see the rebuilt of Vegetasei?
Look forward to next chapter.
Look forward to next chapter.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah hard rock is the only music to drive to, hope they kept it on when they had hot car hood sex :)
Good car chase. I guess the Ninja's cars were reinforced to withstand ki blasts since they knew they were up against a Saiyan, though I can't help but feel Kakarot needs more target practice, not to mention increase his strength. Perhaps Vegeta can train him later, if they can keep their hands off each other long enough :-)
Good car chase. I guess the Ninja's cars were reinforced to withstand ki blasts since they knew they were up against a Saiyan, though I can't help but feel Kakarot needs more target practice, not to mention increase his strength. Perhaps Vegeta can train him later, if they can keep their hands off each other long enough :-)
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is a brilliant story!! Macha said you were good she is right! as always. I love the car chase scene, made my heart jump at my throat. And the lemon before--- that was exquisit!!!
Love this story. please update soon!!
Meanwhile I will check your other stories.
Love this story. please update soon!!
Meanwhile I will check your other stories.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! ^-^ YAY!!!! finaly got an account on this place.
YAY!! ^-^ New chappie!!!! don't stop the hard work ^-^ see ya next friday... or so ^-^
If confused about Zee that's m'a twin sista Zee short for Zeenath.
Happy ^-^
YAY!! ^-^ New chappie!!!! don't stop the hard work ^-^ see ya next friday... or so ^-^
If confused about Zee that's m'a twin sista Zee short for Zeenath.
Happy ^-^
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOoooooh, CAR CHASES! :D Okay, yeah, the lemon performed on the hood of the car was nice, but if they hadn't done that, there wouldn't have been a car chase...
Wait...I was cheering the car chase on, wasn't I? :D Does more lemons = more car chases? :P And more Ninjas? I can't think of how that could be bad....
Wait...I was cheering the car chase on, wasn't I? :D Does more lemons = more car chases? :P And more Ninjas? I can't think of how that could be bad....
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ninja cars! ROFL.
I'm completely loving this. And glad that there is always time for sex. :P
I'm completely loving this. And glad that there is always time for sex. :P
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow me love the chase scene, this story almost reminds me of all the Austin Powers movies or the James Bond movies.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Laughed at Kakarot revealing Raditz's crush on Vegeta when he was younger, and the image of him chasing him around with a spoon :)
Why are the Ninja's after Vegeta?
Glad Kakarot is going with him to Satan City, means more lemons I hope.
Why are the Ninja's after Vegeta?
Glad Kakarot is going with him to Satan City, means more lemons I hope.