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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*heartshaped eyes* I frickin love this story! "Kiss my ass, Oolong" *rolls on the floor laughing
I demand a lemon-cookie or I'll start a sicilian landwar on you. That reference was too easy. *giggles* One of my favourite books/movies EVER.
I demand a lemon-cookie or I'll start a sicilian landwar on you. That reference was too easy. *giggles* One of my favourite books/movies EVER.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it especially kakarott and radditz relationship. i've always wish they could of have a nice, brotherly relationship( as sayians go) in the show.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, while the thought of ninjas chasing the two was kind of freaky, the mental image of Radditz chasing someone with a pancake spoon(!) totally cracked me up. Great work, until next time.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ninjas!!! *CACKLES!!!!*
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this universe. The characters are still themselves but fit into it so well. I like the hundred hostages idea - what an interesting concept. And Bardock would be an awesome commando leader. Ninjas! Bwahaha. I love the ninjas and the way Kakarott reacts to them, as well as his telling Vegeta not to blow up his neighborhood. Very nice how you kept them together so Kakarott continues to be involved.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all those shuriken and not one to hit either of them. did the bad guys get their ninjas half price or something?
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nijas!!!!!!! O.O what do they want?? T-T Why it so SHORT T-T You are a TEASE ^-^ I like that about you. ^-^ See you in two weks ^-^
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no act 2?? *pouts*, love it so far
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm. Another Anon person. I wonder if that name is some kind of disease, out of 10 flames I came across, seven used that name. At least be original yourself if you criticise someone people --'. Anyway, good chapter, I'd love to read more of this.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, the lemon was hot and steamy as always.
LOL Tien in a wig, now that is priceless.
LOL Tien in a wig, now that is priceless.