rate_review Reviews

I don't know why I missed this story when you first posted it, but I have to say, I love it! It's so original, and well written. Some people might not like AU's, but I happen to find that they end up being my favorite stories. And, I also have to say that the best line I have ever read coming out of Vegeta's mind happened to be in this story. That would be 'If power was an aphrodisiac, a hot car was just as good.' I love your characterization of Vegeta because it IS him, but with a different twist. The same could be said of all the characters you have introduced, especially Mrs. Briefs. It's kind of scary imagining here as a chemist, but she was always a great cook in the show, and cooking is nothing more than chemistry. Anyway, I'm off to read the next chapter! Excellent job!

Ahh! I'm looking forward to reading Vegeta's private show with Goku. I can't believe Goku's a caged dancer! It's a pretty funny thought, especially with Master Yoshi running the gay bar. He always seemed to be the type that liked the ladies, but maybe he's making more money this way. And maybe, that's why there's a girl's bathroom. Can't wait for the next update!

..... *drools silently over Goku wearing thong in dance cage*

hmm.. now you have me wondering... and since i'm terrible at remembering how all the sayans looked like, remind me, who was at the door? trying to associate characters and names and such, so i can keep track of what all is going on. *winks* your stories are made to intrigue us all..... and sided with yummy smutastic goodness.

And the plot thikens (-_-I know that's not writen right) what's next?? ^-^

*purrrrrrrrrrrr* I approve. Always like a sexy, sensual Goku. Oh, he's not the super-saiyan? *little hearts in eyes* Does this mean you're going to introduce.. *legasp*.. Buroli to this story? *hardcore-Broli-fan* *eagerly awaits next chapter*

Oh I'm really starting to enjoy this.

Loved Goku dancing in the cage, I was drooling along with Vegeta, laughed at the barman and his Martini quip, and snickered at your description of the homophobes being all hunched up, so true.

If it's not Goku who is super-saiyan then that only leaves Brolli doesn't it? Hmmm, interesting. Eager for more now :)

You're right I did cringe at it being AU, but at least he still Saiyan (don't like them being made human) so I'll continue to read it.

Vegeta seems like 007 and I did love the mad scientist gadgets they gave him.

love it

OMG...Mrs. Briefs as a mad scientist? *CACKELS!!!!*

So far the introductions have been amusing. :) Thanks for taking the time to write a 'set up' chapter that was enjoyable to read.

Nice ^-^ this is going to be interesting ^-^ Happy ^-^ new story to read ^-^ YAY!!! ^-^ Happy ^-^