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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
I noticed you added on chapter one that you used a character from a manga. You need to add it to your disclaimer as well ^_^
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
I noticed you added on chapter one that you used a character from a manga. You need to add it to your disclaimer as well ^_^
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an interesting premise for a story. It was a little confusing at first, but I look forward to seeing what develops between Gohan and this Vegeta with his memories wiped clean.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good first chapter and neat idea. Was it Goku who followed them, he's the only one who could disappear so I hope so.
I like how everything fell apart without Vegeta, and it will be interesting to see if they can restore him to what he was or whether they have to accept him as is and what his relationships with them will be like now. Of course I'm secretly hoping for some closeness between him and Goku :)
I like how everything fell apart without Vegeta, and it will be interesting to see if they can restore him to what he was or whether they have to accept him as is and what his relationships with them will be like now. Of course I'm secretly hoping for some closeness between him and Goku :)