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for Ray's Brother

by Beywriter

schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so freaking sad. i feel so bad for chibi Ray loosing his parents and brother in a day of each other, more so that he actually killed his brother. and what is a 7yr old doing getting greedy for money? why couldn't he be happy with what he had and let his family live, they all would have been happier that way.

and despite being really sad, i enjoyed it. and Ray's story was perfect cause it was almost like his brother was possessed by one of those spirits.
Lirin

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