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by CrimsonTide

schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have one question for you. Can i write a continuation of this story? i don't know too much English so is gonna be in Spanish. write me to my mail: youka_nitta__yaoi__anime_manga@hotmail.com I simple can't stop of reading it and to imagen the continuation can I? please!
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read this Fic too many times and I can't believe that Chichi was this pornographic in the web XD and I can't believe that she really let Vegeta take his husband XD. I still have a doubt. How Chichi proposes to Vegeta what she was planing? Maybe you can add a POV from Vegeta or Chichi that relate what happen in that moment XD I can imagine Vegeta's face (sorry my bad language I'm not too god with English)
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! You know? I think now I have two goddess. One is the goddess of FanArts of Vege x Kaka and the other one the goddess of FanFics of Vege x Kaka. You are the last one an the first one is XxChiChixX. XD

Talking about your fic...was great!! At first I start to think how noughty can be Vegeta for doing it whit a horrible woman there XD and then comes the lovely end: “.....ChiChi.... You need to show me how to use the internet.” jajajajajaja that means that he loves what Vegeta dos to him jajajajaja
person ScaryBulma
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Bows* Amazing! Absolutely fab! I loved it all la la la. xx
person IuvenesL
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. Fun plot, well-written...and I love just about any fic that doesn't take the easy way out of Chichi-hating.
person SacrificialButterfly
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!
That made me laugh ^^
Who knew ChiChi was that kinda gal? =p
I just finished reading what you've done of "In your dreams" and so now I'm gonna work my way through everything else! Lol!
Its almost 2 in the morning and I have to be at work at 10.
I dread to think how hard it's gonna be to pull myself away from the computer =D
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmhm! Sweet, sweet, yaoi...and an actually pleasant touch of Chichi, very nice. Any threesome with Goku and Vegeta and some female is always welcome. Though I don't think anybody has explored this particular plot. I've wanted to do that to my fiance since forever, and when I get my own strap-on....oh the possibilities... Thanks for sharing!
person Robyn
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Oh, I do like your sense of humor! :) And Chichi as the culprit no less!!!! Well written and awkwardly sexy.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes - this is why Chichi needs more love. I'm imagining the negotiations with Vegeta and his pleased surprise when he realized she really meant it.
person Kakrot
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, you did a very good job. ^___^ please continue your good work.

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