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baaaaaaaa hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....

that was awesome!! lol! oo god!! lemme fix the nose bleed there..

ok..

anyways, very wonderful lemon.. and i love how u had chichi not be the bad guy.. it was such a different take on dbz yaoi.. way to go!!!

i give u a jumping high five!!

Boom!

Duuuuuh. My mind has melted! That was totally, completely hot. I have to admit that I had considered writing a story similar to this once before but never really got around to it. I never thought anyone would actually write something like this but you did! Yay for you and your bravery! I also liked that Vegeta came in at the end. That was totally surprising and definitely hot. Poor Goku though, all this happening to him without him knowing what's going on. But I knew he'd enjoy it!

^^ You rock.

That was hilarious!! Great job.

That was different but I loved it!

Didn't think Chichi would be into porn let alone involve Vegeta, but that's the beauty of fanfiction in that anything is possible. Goku certainly wasn't complaining in the end :)