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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah you write these two so well, I believe I'll go read Oceans for about the 10th time now. I hope you write more of them soon, I keep checking for that last little bit of Oceans or a new story you've put up of them :). Keep writing thes two, you're the best at if I've read!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. It really sounded like Goku. Sad they can't be together properly though.
I especially liked the line 'He can’t break Piccolo. He knows. He’s tried.' Typical Goku to test his strength :)
I especially liked the line 'He can’t break Piccolo. He knows. He’s tried.' Typical Goku to test his strength :)
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful. I simply adore this fic and its partner fic. You make it so easy to get into the character's head and 'feel' what they're feeling. It's amazing actually.
Wonderful work, and I can't wait to see another.
Wonderful work, and I can't wait to see another.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've managed to make this another of my OTPs (I can have a bunch, I swear :P ) Such nice touches - the holding a touching and not breaking. And the idea that Piccolo speaks to him in his own language with the Ks and Ss is a huge turn-on. Nice that Goku doesn't hate Chichi and there's no bashing, but there is some confusion of what his real attraction is. There's so much I like about this I think I could almost go line by line. Instead I think I'll poke you for more stories of them as a couple.