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I would really love to see more of this! I know you pretty much tied the storyline up there at the end, but I enjoyed it very much. :)

Excellent work X3
To be honest I was with the group that thought that Roy got off to easy but we all know that he's good at heart he just has a funny way in showing it ^-^ One thing I didn't coming was the *whistles* truly did not see that coming. Thank for continuing too, most fan-fics are forgotten by the writer *cries* (make me cry), but if there is more to this story can't wait to see/read it XD

Oh dear God in Heaven, thank you XD

Give me a minute and I might be able to form coherent sentences lol

Let's start with the letters, oh wow you are a Goddess. I loved the smut, passion, heat filled letters. And then throwing in the smut after that, I think I nearly stopped breathing ^_^ It was so sensual and pure, perfect for their first time together. A lot of people rush into it but you allowed them to explore each other and learn, brilliant.

That ending was priceless, I loved her sloppy sarcastic salute, excellent XD I was in stitches from the second the line 'somethings wrong here...' was spoken. I just knew that had happened.

AngryAl was ace, I love AngryAl. Him and DrunkAl are my new fav characters, they're so good to write too. Al threatening Roy has to be the highlight of any story ;-)

When I read the part addressed to me I had to chuckle. Last night I actually started the pole dancing scene in anticipation of you posting, it's half done, I have to add Roy's side of it then it's another chapter posted. I promise to get the next chapter after that one done within the week but I think I need a rest tonight, your story has me on overload at the moment *_* (that's meant to be sparkly eyes btw XD) Oh and the evil plot bunny threw another twist at me so that should be fun... The evil Winry strikes again heh

Yay! That was great! :) AngryAl was awesome! It did seem at first that Al was just being a prick about Ed and Roy being together but then you realize that he's just looking out for Ed's best interests. Roy did play a very nasty joke on Ed and Al doesn't seem the type to forgive and forget easily. It was almost like it was just desserts for Roy and Ed to walk in on (sorta) Al and Riza on the couch. At least Roy didn't berate Al for sleeping with Riza the way Al did Roy with Ed! :)

Loved the erotic letters! They were the perfect vehicle for them to keep the fires of passion burning while learning a bit about each other so their relationship could grow, deepen, become more solid and secure. I REALLY liked the way you wrote their first time together! :) I did snicker at Ed tho when he came so early in the touchy-feely game! XD The way they explored each other with their hands before they even did anything really explicit was so erotic, so sensual. It definitely made the 4 months they were apart worth the wait! :)

I vote for one big one!!! :D The little teasers have me all anxious to see the next chapter!! It's gonna be awesome! Al, "I swear on my mother’s grave, Roy, if you hurt my brother again, they’ll never find your body..." squee!! Al is so ebil!! :D Protective!Al is scary! LOL I can't wait to read the whole chapter!! :)

If you post both together, 2. If you plan on making us wait with teasers like that and only give us one a week then 1, all of it!! Now please!!!

I want to see angry Al. And if you post it all now I'll go and finish Karaoke, complete with pole dancing Ed and Epilogue smut XD And yes I am trying to bribe you XD
Is it working?? lol

Gasp! You're holding it hostage for reviews?! Well, I'm afraid I don't cooperate with kidnappers! Now post that last chapter, because I've loved this story, and must see how it ends!
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...Curses...I've given in to your demands...

*giggle* I can so see Al being a slobbering drunk! He just seems like the type who can't hold his liquor! XD I laughed my ass off at Ed yelling at him! I think that's the only time I've ever seen Ed curse at Al like that! Props to Roy for pulling the party together for Ed like he did. I don't know about anybody else but I like the way Roy and Ed are getting along now. Ed's slow steady realization of his feelings seems quite natural, esp given how often inept he is with basic human interaction. :) I VERY much like the fact that Ed got to do the seducing here, very nice turnabout! Go Ed! :D I totally expected Roy to try and put his best moves on Ed post party but Ed turned the tables on him and has Roy right where he wants him! :) I can't wait to see what happens in the morning!! Al with a hangover will be pretty funny and, hopefully, Roy and Ed will have worked out this "situation" between them! :)

Oh God how I just love this story so far, please continue as soon as possible ^^

Damn that was good XD

Ed sure knows how to make your heart pound and I'm just loving Al in this chapter, projectile vomit hehe.

I'm slightly speachless right now so I'll just plead for the second half. I want to see angry Al *down on hands and knees begging* PLEASE