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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins* That's what I said in my last review - that Roy was being a bratty little boy to get the attention of the one he likes, aka Ed! :D I called it! YAYZ! :) I'm anxious to see where things go from here. They do say the best relationships/lovers start out as friends! :)
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, a fitting end. I had to laugh at Roy's last line, it was just so him XD
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an asshole. He's playing a prank on Ed by telling him he has cancer? Roy deserves whatever Ed does to him for that.
Loving the fic though. ^-^
Loving the fic though. ^-^
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, Roy sure has a funny way of showing someone he likes them doesn't he? :) All of his stupid little pranks are like the classic little boy who pulls the hair of the girl he likes just so she'll notice him, to get a reaction. Just look at him now! :) He has Ed's undivided attention and it scares him to death! XD The bartender was funny! Good thing for him he didn't say anything about Ed looking female otherwise, given Ed's current mood, it would not have gone well for him!! :) With each passing chapter I'm more and more impressed with how well Ed is keeping his temper under control. I keep anticipating Ed going into a full blown thrashing rage over something Roy's done but he has yet to do so! The waiting for the other shoe to drop is killing me! XDDD I can't wait to see what happens when these two talk!
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved that the bartender mistook Ed for a girl, that was just priceless XD
Oh so good, Roy's really in for it now :)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh so good, Roy's really in for it now :)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My my! Ed took that surprisingly well! I figured there would be much more destruction from Ed when he finally heard the truth. I honestly thought Roy would come away from his confession with several broken bones. I'm really very surprised that Roy confessed at all actually. I guess since he chose such a difficult thing to hide the truth about for long he really had no choice. He deserves the pain and remorse he's feeling for being such an idiot to begin with. It would serve him right if Ed had even less respect for him now than he ever did before. Trust is a very fragile thing. Once it's broken, it is very difficult to repair, if at all. Can't wait to read more!! :)
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I'm really enjoying this story, and I got a happy feeling when Ed broke Roy's hand XD
Granted I love these two as a pair but Roy so deserved that.
Granted I love these two as a pair but Roy so deserved that.
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*glares at Roy* Why you sorry sonofabitch! That is just pure raw evil! Oooh you are sooo going to pay when the truth comes out about this one! grrrr! :)
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to enjoy finding out what Ed does to Roy when he learns the truth XD. Brilliant start, can't wait for more.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Mustang is being too too EVIL! Ed and Trisha and Al must be avenged. I cannot believe Roy would do such a thing. Ed and especially Al will never forgive him. (Riza too! and Maes!). You really need to finish this and Roy needs to get his comeupance. Bad Bad Roy!! Ed really needs to get even and I hope members of the FMA gang help him. Cannot wait to see the next installment.