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Oh wow, that was so moving and passionate.

I really felt Goku's emotions, the overwhelming love sensations consuming him, and his longing for Vegeta to just say the word brought tears to my eyes. It was just simply beautiful.

Any chance you could write a sequel where they come out as I hate to leave them there. Surely Chichi will catch on eventually, she already seems to be suspicious even after just a few weeks. Pretty please *offers cookies* :o)