rate_review Reviews

i loved the story (just saying i enjoyed it would have to be an understatement (it was that damn good)). Making Winry "evil" must have better fun using ed's own words against him "a dog of the military", when really she was being a little angel X3
prefect, brilliant, or amazing work either word will do or just all of the above (it was that damn good) XD

PHWOAR! I didn't think another update was coming! D: *Squee!!*

"“Just hit him with the wrench, he won’t feel it.”" --Bahaha! I totally pictured Al groping Winry and getting knocked unconscious.

And d'awwwwwwwww at the new doggie collar tag! :D

"Ed scrambled backwards quickly and turned a beautiful shade of red that Roy didn’t think even had a name."--I love that line *so* much.

"I’m more of a slide and ride fan myself."--Holyfuckingshit I giggled at that. I had to stop reading for a minute to stop laughing. XD

Awwh, the ending line was too sweet. And definitely pure Ed! And you did wonderful on the smut, hun! ;D Though I agree with Roy that watching Ed prep himself would've been damn hot. XD

Okay, haven't read it yet, but OMG, I squeed when I stalked your page and saw the update. XD *Starts reading now*

Oh, Lord... I love your drunk!Al so much. XD FOUR shots?! Jesus Christ... they'll need to take him to the hospital. Soon! :|

And ohmygod--awesome. I can't believe that Winry was... being nice?! O_o Holy shit! XD Awesome little twist there, and a great ending too! It was so sweet, but hot at the same time. Bravo!!

--Blysse

*big grin* Oh that was goooood!! The smut was great! You should listen to your muse more often! XD I'm not completely ready to forgive Winry for being such a bitch and putting Ed thru all this drama but at least it turned out good in the end! :) I liked that Ed changed the tag on the collar to read "Property of Roy Mustang"! Me likey the tiny bit of kink! :D I was surprised Ed didn't wear the posing pouch. After having gone thru everything else, what harm would that little bit do? ;) Probably a good thing tho. Chafing from the leather aside, Roy probably would have passed out, and therefore been unable to perform, had he seen it on Ed! XDDD

"When a sudden thought hit him that included a very naked Ed riding a very naked Havoc while Roy watched he nearly lost all manner of control."

*He* lost control? *HE lost control?!* I just lost control over that. O_<

And... just lost control again. At imagining Ed. In those clothes... back on the pole. >_> *o*

And heck, yes, that was fast enough for an update! XD

And tit for tat, eh, on our innocence? ;D

Oh my lord, I just about fainted there! @_@ Ed... on a pole... humping the pole... and moaning. *Re-reads pole-scene many times over.*

You just killed the last shred of... innocence? I had left! XD THANK YOU.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

--Blysse

*grins* I only have two things to say - Ed pole dancing is the hottest thing evah and evil Winry must DIE! LOL! I'm almost afraid to think what might be in that bag! :) Run Ed run! Let evil Winry do whatever she wants with Al! He's so drunk off his ass he won't feel it! XD I hope Roy gets some relief soon. (Blue balls anyone? XD) Roy thinking about Armstrong's sparkles to talk himself down was hilarious! :D

WOO! Pole dance! I called it! LOL! OMG, I can't imagine how embarrassed Ed is right now! :) You crack me up with the way you describe Winry! Evil blonde bitch with a "someone is walking over your grave" laugh! XD Do I even want to know how Armstrong got his hands of one of Roy's gloves? ;) Drunk!Al is great! I guarantee you he will remember what he said and will follow thru on it too! Mmmm! Ed "leaning back against the pole, head back, mic to his mouth, one foot slightly raised leaning against the pole, the other hand behind his back [as he anxiously waits] for the music to start" is delicious! Move over, Roy! I gotta see this! Let the show begin!! :D

ROFLWAFFLES! You gave Armstrong the sparkles!!

First of all--drunk Al is hilarious. XD There needs to be more of it!

And secondly... I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT TO US! D< I want to see Ed dance on the pole now, AND know what song it is! I'm going to keep stalking your story now, with more fervor than before!! T_T

Roy should do The Wanderer.