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I think the conversation went as well as could be expected to too. It would be very bad if Al suddenly showed up and started hovering over Ed smothering him with well intended yet painful kindness. Oh I want to weep for Ed for so many reasons! T_T So glad he's out of that hell. Now is when Roy's real work begins. I'm anxious to see how he will help Ed deal with and work thru all that he has suffered. I can't help but think that Ed will lash out at Roy for not finding him sooner. I'm anxious to see how they both will cope with that one. This may get worse before it gets better. I eagerly await the next update! :)

holly hell i wont more.... shit girl you pick good story lines

Oh my bob I'm crying, poor Edward but at least Al is fine and they'll be together soon ...right?

Oh, yes, please call Al and let him know Ed has been found. Poor Ed...all those slave years...he has been broken but now needs to heal. Cannot wait for the FMA gang to know Ed has been rescued...hopefully they can help him rebuild himself and his life. Poor Roy too....

Damn it... when's the next chapter coming?

Oooh, great beginning and very nicely written. I'm looking forward to the rest.
You've set yourself quite a task at dealing with the broken Edward.
Thanks for posting this, Ronnie. :)
p.s. If possible could you email me when there's an update (fouloldron at yahoo dot com dot au)? :)

Poor Ed. Hope things will get better.

Poor Ed, he really is in a bad state :(

Roy should have just incinerated them al and taken him, I'm really supprised at his restraint.

Really good story so far, can't wait to read more. And don't worry about the update thing, I'm exactly the same XD

me want to ready, ME WANT TO READY! O.O Please update soon this looks like its gonna be a goodin!!

You know, you're just being cruel by only giving us a teaser XD

Looking forward to the next chapter.